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Inhaling the Sea

I sink into the ocean 
Water so intrepid 
The salt that carves,
Canals in my skin, and stains my lungs
	
Yet I am not overpowered
Gliding down through azure expanses
The melodious harp, I hear 
From a foreign dimension 
		
As I rest in bliss

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/11/2014 7:08:00 PM
Zachary, lovely win~ Love ~ SKAT
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Date: 2/1/2014 7:06:00 PM
Wow, great poem, Zachery. Amazing choice of metaphorical imagery, and deep meaning. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.
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Date: 1/19/2014 3:10:00 PM
This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara
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Date: 1/12/2014 5:14:00 PM
Congrats on your win... nice write
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Date: 1/12/2014 4:38:00 PM
Very interesting and beautiful...congratulations on your win..
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Date: 1/12/2014 10:42:00 AM
A burial at sea? Congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/12/2014 12:53:00 AM
Beautiful write on the theme and congrats on the win, zachary
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Date: 1/11/2014 9:33:00 PM
This was a very interesting one. Unique among them. Congrats for your win.
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