Inhaling

canoe has its ribs

A man's ribs facing upward

In river and rain

 


January 22, 2011 (c) Copyright 2011 Albert Geiser, All Rights Reserved,
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June 2, 2016 at 1:23 AM
Albert, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT
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January 22, 2011 at 2:48 PM
this made me think of a man dying all alone on the river. Did I get it right?
Mehta Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 2:39 PM
Quite with variant meanings with good images, albert
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January 22, 2011 at 7:21 AM
Nice...I like the images you are portraying Albert! GORGEOUS, Gorgeous Images!!! Christine PS: And its nice to read a Haiku with the proper amount of SYLLABLES!!! ~Smiles~
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