Home » Poems » Paul Callus » Inhale Exhale

Paul Callus | + Follow Poet |

Inhale Exhale

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Paul Callus.

Hauling huge heifers to High Heavens Seems somewhat simple but not heaven sent Because bulls’ brides can be back-breaking... Welcome to Wycombe! Smell heavenly scent! ----------------------------- A Twist my Tongue Contest Hosted by Nina Parmenter © 16th January 2020

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 1/26/2020 5:00:00 PM

Love this tongue twister Paul. Hilarious and clever. Hugs

Paul Callus
Date: 1/27/2020 4:39:00 AM

I'm pleased you enjoyed it, Cecilia:) thank you. Have a lovely day! Hugs // paul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/23/2020 4:53:00 PM

Love it, Paul. Just what Dear Heart is seeking. Sending winning wishes your way! Hugs, Carolyn

Paul Callus
Date: 1/24/2020 1:21:00 PM

Thank you, Carolyn. Now I must go check out Dear Heart's contest. Have a lovely weekend:) Hugs // paul

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 1/23/2020 2:55:00 PM

Love the humor Paul took me a minute for this one. love phyl

Paul Callus
Date: 1/24/2020 1:19:00 PM

Pleased that you enjoyed it, Phyllis. Best regards // paul

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/20/2020 10:37:00 AM

Your poem is great Paul - a lot said in few words - I enjoyed your humorous last line. A wise and creative write, well penned dear friend. warm wishes and hugs. Jenny

Paul Callus
Date: 1/21/2020 12:52:00 PM

Thank you, Jenny. I must admit it was not easy to write!! ~ Warm regards & Hugs // paul

Laura Leiser

Date: 1/19/2020 10:37:00 AM

This is clever, humorous and ingenious, Paul! Very well done! :)

Paul Callus
Date: 1/20/2020 7:26:00 AM

Thank you for the generous feedback, Laura:) Warm regards // paul

Anil Deo

Date: 1/17/2020 9:01:00 PM

because bulls' brides can be back-breaking! Twisted my tongue - and my imagination. shalom, shalom Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 1/18/2020 5:09:00 PM

Thank you for the pleasant visit and the smile, Anil :) Goodnight (after midnight here) // paul

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/17/2020 1:58:00 PM

Great one Paul :)

Paul Callus
Date: 1/17/2020 2:30:00 PM

Thank you, Heidi. Enjoy the weekend :) // paul

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/17/2020 5:25:00 AM

This tongue twister I expect to see standing in the winner's circle with a lei around it's neck.

Paul Callus
Date: 1/17/2020 8:42:00 AM

Thank you for your generosity, Caren:) Have a nice weekend. // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 1/16/2020 10:54:00 PM

Good one , Paul,. Good luck in the contest.

Paul Callus
Date: 1/17/2020 8:41:00 AM

Thank you, Eve. Regards & Hugs // paul

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 1/16/2020 9:01:00 PM

G'day Paul … twists and turns everywhere. My tongue has cramped - thanks Paul - Lindsay

Paul Callus
Date: 1/17/2020 8:36:00 AM

Thank you for being game enough to try your hand (tongue) at this twister, Lindsay!! Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/16/2020 8:42:00 PM

you chose interesting consonants to use, Joseph and you created a clever poem

Paul Callus
Date: 1/17/2020 8:30:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea; I just don't know what compelled me to write about the content of this poem!:) Regards // paul

Chris Green

Date: 1/16/2020 12:27:00 PM

Nice one Paul. This will do well in the contest

Paul Callus
Date: 1/16/2020 1:18:00 PM

Thank you for reading and liking, Chris. All the best // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/16/2020 12:06:00 PM

Hello Paul Callus, yes garbage does stink. I do agree. Have a nice day my friend.

Paul Callus
Date: 1/16/2020 1:12:00 PM

At least now they try to control the smells, Darlene! Thank you for stopping by. Regards // paul

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/16/2020 12:06:00 PM

You composed this well Paul, got tied on line two lol. Nice to see you back. Tom

Paul Callus
Date: 1/16/2020 1:11:00 PM

Thank you, Tom. This was created thanks to memories from High Wycombe. Regards // paul

Winged Warrior

Date: 1/16/2020 12:03:00 PM

You twist with the best of them Paul...you got me tongue-tied lol...the tongue twister tango is on lol...^WW^ :o)

Paul Callus
Date: 1/16/2020 12:41:00 PM

Thank you, WW. This reminds me of Chubby Checker: "Come on let's twist again..." ~ Regards // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 1/16/2020 11:11:00 AM

clever tongue twister Paul:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 1/16/2020 11:21:00 AM

A big welcome to my first commenting visitor!! Thank you Jan! Pleased that you enjoyed, though I'm not quite sure if this is what our sponsor is looking for! Hugs // paul