Paul Callus Poet Rhyme

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Inhale Exhale

Hauling huge heifers to High Heavens
Seems somewhat simple but not heaven sent
Because bulls’ brides can be back-breaking...
Welcome to Wycombe! Smell heavenly scent!


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A Twist my Tongue Contest
Hosted by Nina Parmenter
© 16th January 2020

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Cecilia Macfarlane January 26, 2020 at 5:00 PM Love this tongue twister Paul. Hilarious and clever. Hugs Paul Callus January 27, 2020 at 4:39 AM I'm pleased you enjoyed it, Cecilia:) thank you. Have a lovely day! Hugs // paul

Carolyn Devonshire January 23, 2020 at 4:53 PM Love it, Paul. Just what Dear Heart is seeking. Sending winning wishes your way! Hugs, Carolyn Paul Callus January 24, 2020 at 1:21 PM Thank you, Carolyn. Now I must go check out Dear Heart's contest. Have a lovely weekend:) Hugs // paul

Phyllis Babcock January 23, 2020 at 2:55 PM Love the humor Paul took me a minute for this one. love phyl Paul Callus January 24, 2020 at 1:19 PM Pleased that you enjoyed it, Phyllis. Best regards // paul

Jennifer Proxenos January 20, 2020 at 10:37 AM Your poem is great Paul - a lot said in few words - I enjoyed your humorous last line. A wise and creative write, well penned dear friend. warm wishes and hugs. Jenny Paul Callus January 21, 2020 at 12:52 PM Thank you, Jenny. I must admit it was not easy to write!! ~ Warm regards & Hugs // paul

Laura Leiser January 19, 2020 at 10:37 AM This is clever, humorous and ingenious, Paul! Very well done! :) Paul Callus January 20, 2020 at 7:26 AM Thank you for the generous feedback, Laura:) Warm regards // paul

Anil Deo January 17, 2020 at 9:01 PM because bulls' brides can be back-breaking! Twisted my tongue - and my imagination. shalom, shalom Paul. Paul Callus January 18, 2020 at 5:09 PM Thank you for the pleasant visit and the smile, Anil :) Goodnight (after midnight here) // paul

Heidi Sands January 17, 2020 at 1:58 PM Great one Paul :) Paul Callus January 17, 2020 at 2:30 PM Thank you, Heidi. Enjoy the weekend :) // paul

Caren Krutsinger January 17, 2020 at 5:25 AM This tongue twister I expect to see standing in the winner's circle with a lei around it's neck. Paul Callus January 17, 2020 at 8:42 AM Thank you for your generosity, Caren:) Have a nice weekend. // paul

Eve Roper January 16, 2020 at 10:54 PM Good one , Paul,. Good luck in the contest. Paul Callus January 17, 2020 at 8:41 AM Thank you, Eve. Regards & Hugs // paul

Lindsay Laurie January 16, 2020 at 9:01 PM G'day Paul … twists and turns everywhere. My tongue has cramped - thanks Paul - Lindsay Paul Callus January 17, 2020 at 8:36 AM Thank you for being game enough to try your hand (tongue) at this twister, Lindsay!! Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich January 16, 2020 at 8:42 PM you chose interesting consonants to use, Joseph and you created a clever poem Paul Callus January 17, 2020 at 8:30 AM Thank you, Andrea; I just don't know what compelled me to write about the content of this poem!:) Regards // paul

Chris Green January 16, 2020 at 12:27 PM Nice one Paul. This will do well in the contest Paul Callus January 16, 2020 at 1:18 PM Thank you for reading and liking, Chris. All the best // paul

Tom Cunningham January 16, 2020 at 12:06 PM You composed this well Paul, got tied on line two lol. Nice to see you back. Tom Paul Callus January 16, 2020 at 1:11 PM Thank you, Tom. This was created thanks to memories from High Wycombe. Regards // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu January 16, 2020 at 12:06 PM Hello Paul Callus, yes garbage does stink. I do agree. Have a nice day my friend. Paul Callus January 16, 2020 at 1:12 PM At least now they try to control the smells, Darlene! Thank you for stopping by. Regards // paul

Winged Warrior January 16, 2020 at 12:03 PM You twist with the best of them Paul...you got me tongue-tied lol...the tongue twister tango is on lol...^WW^ :o) Paul Callus January 16, 2020 at 12:41 PM Thank you, WW. This reminds me of Chubby Checker: "Come on let's twist again..." ~ Regards // paul

Jan Allison January 16, 2020 at 11:11 AM clever tongue twister Paul:-) hugs Jan xx Paul Callus January 16, 2020 at 11:21 AM A big welcome to my first commenting visitor!! Thank you Jan! Pleased that you enjoyed, though I'm not quite sure if this is what our sponsor is looking for! Hugs // paul