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Inhabitants of Space

you inhabit your space
without you
there is just a chair
with you —
breaking wind

yes, he is funny
and inhabits hosts
If I was so-and-so I’d tell him
a thing or two

you try to ignore me
but I take up space too
and you find me
in your neighborhood

if not my perfume
nor my black flannel p.j.’s with stars
nor my flapping lips
what are you looking for

yes, my stance
right in front of your four eyes
i remove your glasses
and mine
so we can examine each other
up close

i press in
where the boudoir door closes behind us
and you find familiar territory

later we sit in our living space
and you trace my smile
for i’ve made you remember
that we are separated
only by warm air
nothing more

1/13/2021

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Date: 1/16/2021 7:30:00 PM
So delicate and pretty, explains so many warm relaxed comfortable relationships.
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Date: 1/13/2021 3:51:00 PM
Interesting to picture life without space... with all of us glombed together, pressing against each other... Not for me, for sure ~ INMS (I need my space). :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/13/2021 5:35:00 PM
We all need our space. Great thing about great marriages...we come together and also respect time alone.
Date: 1/13/2021 1:30:00 PM
I see you discarded outer space and sought lateral thinking. Very original. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/13/2021 5:35:00 PM
Thank you :)

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