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Ingratitude

INGRATITUDE

How could you give me such extreme distress
While my care for you has always been so strong
When you erred in thinking you were a success
Did I not show you, where you were going wrong

When you spent such toil on your pathetic writing
I revealed how you were wasting all your time
I put you right and helped you with my chiding
To get you straight and back again in line

The expression of ideas you took delight in
And wilfully disputed truth in mine
Why couldn't you conform and stop the fighting
Your rebelliousness it really was a crime

You would still be in religious cult induction
If I hadn't made a plan for your salvation
Though you fought and screamed that it was an abduction
For your sake we had to use incarceration

With your protests diagnosed as bipolarity
A psychiatrist said psych-medicine would be kind
Then a good dose of electroconvulsive therapy
Brought you to a more amenable frame of mind

And yet you now show such a lack of gratitude 
All my caring seems to be misunderstood
And I find it hard to understand your attitude
Since I've always done what's purely for your good

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/28/2017 12:31:00 AM
When one tries his or her best, to be treated with ingratitude is heartbreaking. I really love the way you've put these emotional words into rhyme Geoffrey. You have certainly captured the moment...Maria
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 10/28/2017 5:44:00 AM
Dear Maria, Thank you for your kind commments. But - could I refer you to my notes on this poem - particularly with reference to the ‘irony’ and the ‘voice of ....’ i.e. my complaint is not of ‘ingratitude’ to me.
Date: 10/26/2017 4:51:00 AM
Great stuff Geoff... brilliantly told in excellent rhyme. I fully agree, a good deed should never go unsung. Looking forward to reading more of your work. Best, Dennis
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