Ingratitude

a praying mantis
on knees busy revering
me so bewildered
if this small mortal complies
why humans are ungracious
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Nunez Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 8:32 AM
A fine, contemplative tanka, sire. The mantis must be thinking the same! Love this one too, sire. Hugs and smiles from the isles! Kim :)
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January 31, 2015 at 1:56 AM
Hi Abdelwaheb, thank you for the nice reply
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January 10, 2015 at 10:11 PM
Hi Abdelwaheb, Congratulations on having your poem featured on Poetry Soup's Home Page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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January 30, 2015 at 11:48 AM
Thanks heaps dear Lynda ! Looking forward to reading what you concoct with pleasure. Hugs
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December 30, 2014 at 7:28 PM
Abdelwaheb,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy being part of the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, "In The Moment" in hopes it inspires you to write again. I look forward in following you and your poetry:) Enjoy this site, and the coming New Year! From: your new poet friend@-> LINDA <-@
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December 31, 2014 at 7:56 AM
Thanks heaps Linda for your kind comment and thank you for the invitation. Really delighted my new poet friend !
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