Inflicted In Time Till End

all stars and planets
                                        inflicted in time till end
                                            Universe's of God

                                            in time we are all
                                           limited bodies in it
                                          span is fixed by Him
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Petersen Potter Avatar
February 13, 2015 at 4:27 PM
Excellent pen BL! I enjoyed reading your piece, my dear friend! You said it right. A 7 from me! Have a very lovely day! In his light! God bless you! And I wish a very happy Valentines Day! :) Love n hugs! xxx D.
Devnath  Avatar
February 15, 2015 at 12:28 PM
Thanks my lovely friend for your nice comment and for 7. I too wish you Happy Valentine Day. Loved always,bl
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 7:55 AM
as beautiful and as inspiring are your words my friend.. Thank God for HE created the world so wonderful :)! ==olive eloisa
Devnath  Avatar
February 12, 2015 at 1:47 PM
Thanks a lot my lovely friend for your lovely comment. Loved always,bl
Tian Avatar
February 4, 2015 at 4:33 PM
Very nice poem. The contemplation of God's power displayed throughout His creation is supremely worthwhile. God bless you. May He reveal Himself to you as often as you consider Him and the works of His hands.
Devnath  Avatar
February 5, 2015 at 12:41 PM
Thanks a lot for your appreciation.........till my sensely words end with the same thanks, my lovely friend. I love your name Chris Tian means Christian. You are brave with great worldly heart in true sense smelling from your name. A toe of God is God's and little finger of God is God's too as all other limbs in His body. Without physical body God's the only omnipresent and omnipotent.........unending and non else exists in all souls. He offers His mercy to all but sorry to say that many of us are too much stubborn so are punished. His punishment is such that He inflicts senses of destruction which disobedient feels that as wisdom. With that negative thought he destructs. One who have wisdom he always carry on such constructions from which lives get benefit. But whatever is there, everything is time bound not more than that surely, as i feel. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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