Jay Del Fierro Poet Free verse

Infinity and I...

Infinity,an ongoing paradox
there is no end,without a beginning,
no center without circumference,
primordial matter the ancient ylem
or...are we and the other orbs,just
ganglions in the almighty universal mind?
light charged signals of transmission
transient thoughts with a purpose,
...maybe a supernova isn't the end,
could be the spark of a new idea
radiant particles splashing 
the fabric of space,like
an artist would on blank canvas...

Infinity...whispers to me,
as I gaze continuously,and says
"the depths of you,is as deep as I..."

and with a sigh...I wonder,
will I ever be able to touch such depths...

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Tommy Dorsey December 16, 2010 at 5:29 PM Jay...first thanks for reading my thoughts ...secondly this one made me think ...i like several of your poems hopefully mine will be able to make others think as well

Caroline Cécile Delacroix September 4, 2010 at 4:37 PM With a similar title, I wrote,"Where infinity lies". It is written perhaps in a different perspective, but check it out if you like. Peace to you too. Caroline.

Caroline Cécile Delacroix September 4, 2010 at 4:35 PM It is a wonder indeed! Such fabulous imagery here, Jay! A paradox? Maybe. I am sure there is a beginning to the existence of man. I don't think there will be an end to that, but the Almighty Universal Mind always has been and will be. And from the mind, we have been placed in a position of center of this universe or cosmos. That much we are loved. That much is our true value. Thanks for sharing this jewel of a write and thanks for your kind comments on my latest.

Farah Chamma August 31, 2010 at 9:21 PM I agree with Karen. As usual Jaybird, your poem is thought-provoking and lovely. Always, Farah

August 29, 2010 at 10:27 AM Much for the reader to ponder about in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

De R August 28, 2010 at 9:46 AM Congrats on your poem being featured this week, Jay:) Emily

Nate D. August 26, 2010 at 10:04 PM congrats, on your featured poem of the week"

Poet Destroyer A August 26, 2010 at 8:26 AM Lovely Jay, congratulation for having your poem featured this week . It is an awesome poem,..p.d.

Skat A August 26, 2010 at 8:11 AM HI JAY, GONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR POEM BEING FEATURED THIS WEEK~SKAT~

Carol Sunshine Brown August 23, 2010 at 9:36 AM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Jay. Love, Carol

Connie Marcum Wong August 22, 2010 at 7:56 PM Congratulations on this romantic and passionate poem being featured. It is just beautiful! Aloha, Connie

Ravindra K Kapoor August 22, 2010 at 6:46 PM Congrats my friend on this lovely Poem being featured this week. A Great lovely write it is. Love and best wishes....Ravindra...Jay del fierro

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 22, 2010 at 4:28 PM Congrats Jay on your featured poem this week on the Soup... a great one to share with us all..with luv..ciao..

De R August 22, 2010 at 7:27 AM Great piece, jay...you really are a philosopher. All of us wonder sometimes from where did we came from and what is our purpose. Wonderful poetry, my friend.

Skat A August 21, 2010 at 7:39 PM Jay it sounds very sweet, glad I stoped to read your wonderful poem. A very lovely way to end my day. Have a wonderful one*LUV~ Skat

John Rhinem August 21, 2010 at 6:37 PM Smile ~ "Have The Most Beautiful of Evenings My Dear Friend, Wrapped Amid The Touch of Everlastings Hands of Light & Love;" Bye Jay!:) ~ Ps. I shall be reading this majestic verse again for, there seems to be something wonderful I believe to be possibly found....Smile, "Bye!":) ~

John Rhinem August 21, 2010 at 6:33 PM Smile ~ I think You will my dear friend ~ "Hello Beautiful Soul & Gifted Jay Del Fierro!!!" ~ What an astonishing verse and painting amid brilliance this bit of vision and reflection so very truly is ~ Beyond a doubt a fave and, "Extremely Profoundly Beautiful Images & Thoughts!!!" ~ Hope "You" are well my dear friend and, "Much Love & Warmth to You & All You Love, Always," John! ~ ....Cont:)

M.I.A . August 21, 2010 at 2:54 PM wonderful! and yes, i think you had touched such depths. Did not these words you wrote proved that? thank you for your nice comment ^.^

Sara Kendrick August 21, 2010 at 1:33 PM Piquant thoughts that you have penned in this one..Enjoyed reading..Sara

Sarah Hales August 21, 2010 at 12:35 PM s mail

Wilma Neels August 21, 2010 at 9:47 AM Thought provoking write Jay.. Awesome, makes me think, enjoy your weekend :) Wilma

Carolyn Devonshire August 21, 2010 at 9:06 AM The paradox of infinity, no beginning/no end evokes some philosophical thoughts that you express very well here, Jay. A very deep poem! Love, Carolyn

Ravindra K Kapoor August 21, 2010 at 8:28 AM Brilliantly written a thought provoking Poem. Even you have tried to touch the infinity which otherwise remains always untouched. What a lovely conclusion. I really love these lines ' Infinity...whispers to me, as I gaze continuously, and says" the depths of you, is as deep as I..." You appears to be very close to Indian philosophy of life which says “The Brahma or the God of creation is within us in our mind and heart and soul. Great Write. Love & best wishes..Ravindra. jay del fierro

Marycile Beer August 21, 2010 at 6:53 AM You're working on it, Jay. I refer to the last line. This is a very well thought out poem. I like the depth you have taken it. Good Work, God Bless, Cile Thanks for your comment on Uncle Sam

Sarah Hales August 21, 2010 at 3:54 AM well you touch all depths in your writes ...love it .....sarah x