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as one tree naked we stand silenced by the dawn shivering, alone in fear snapping like branches our minds weighted down in thought as lives, like leaves spiral down april 11 2020 pick a title sedoka contest Sponsored by Edward Ibeh #2 infinitude

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Date: 4/18/2020 5:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest with this fabulous poem, Sandra:-) It's even better edited, but I loved the original also!
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Date: 4/18/2020 9:08:00 AM
Congratulations my dear Sandy on your terrific win, - your two last lines are totally thought provoking. Terrific imagination. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 4/17/2020 3:26:00 PM
There's a very strong visual produced by this piece; well done.
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Date: 4/14/2020 6:37:00 AM
Very thought-provoking poem, Sandra! Love and more love always.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 4/14/2020 8:40:00 AM
Thank you so much Freddie... hugs and blessings
Date: 4/13/2020 2:48:00 PM
Fine write Sandy, you've penned this so well. Hope you're ok and keeping well and safe,Blessings and hugs,Gordon
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Sandra Adams
Date: 4/13/2020 7:00:00 PM
Thank you so much Gordon... hugs and blessings
Date: 4/13/2020 1:01:00 PM
- Congratulations on a great winning poem in Edward Ibeh Sedoka contest, Sandra :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/13/2020 6:59:00 PM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise… hugs
Date: 4/13/2020 12:49:00 PM
Now this was amazing and I don't know how I missed it but I found it now and a winner on top of that. My friend. your talent just grows and grows.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 4/13/2020 6:59:00 PM
Thank you for such a kind comment Chris... hugs
Date: 4/13/2020 12:29:00 AM
Wow.. You created a magical Sedoka.. This one I liked the most..Great win Sandra..
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Sandra Adams
Date: 4/13/2020 6:57:00 PM
Thank you so very much Jenish… hugs
Date: 4/12/2020 7:37:00 PM
That last line goes right through me. Bone chilling shivers...
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Sandra Adams
Date: 4/13/2020 6:57:00 PM
Thank you Gershon... hugs and blessings
Date: 4/12/2020 5:27:00 PM
Gorgeous one, Sandy!! and Congrats.
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Date: 4/13/2020 6:56:00 PM
Thank you so much Andrea... hugs
Date: 4/12/2020 1:43:00 PM
- Although it feels small and naked ... it has a power ... it will survive, Sandra - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 4/13/2020 6:56:00 PM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise… hugs
Date: 4/12/2020 9:02:00 AM
Even at there weakest moments trees are still strong. Great work! Wonderful poem
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Sandra Adams
Date: 4/13/2020 6:56:00 PM
Thank you so much...I am blessed to have so many around to look at... great inspiration often... hugs
Date: 4/12/2020 7:10:00 AM
I wrote about a tree also... Your poem has a powerful metaphor .
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Sandra Adams
Date: 4/12/2020 7:32:00 AM
Thank you so much my friend... trees often make good metaphors... Happy Easter... hugs
Date: 4/12/2020 6:28:00 AM
A prayer for a Happy Easter full of health and love is being sent your way dear poet friend. Thank you.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 4/12/2020 7:32:00 AM
Thank you so much Pixie.... Happy Easter, prayers, hugs and blessings to you!
Date: 4/12/2020 2:54:00 AM
Profound and beautiful poem dearest, Sandra! Certainly deserves recognition! Happy Easter. Hugs xxx
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Sandra Adams
Date: 4/12/2020 7:31:00 AM
Thank you so much Demetrios... Happy Easter, hugs and blessings! XoXo
Date: 4/12/2020 2:26:00 AM
Congrats Sandra on your top win! Another beautiful poem from that captures the present!
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Date: 4/12/2020 7:30:00 AM
Thank you so much Krish… the present times have been fueling most of my muses thoughts... Happy Easter! hugs
Date: 4/11/2020 9:49:00 PM
Oh Sandra, I think Edward will love this entry. You did well! I am not good with this form. Have a very Happy Easter my friend! xxoo
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Date: 4/11/2020 9:52:00 PM
Thank you Connie...I snuck it in as the last entry and it was my first attempt at this form, Edward must have liked it some, it was one of the first place winners... Happy Easter, hugs and blessings XoXo
Date: 4/11/2020 5:02:00 PM
Wonderful blend of imagery and emotion ..indeed lives are spiraling into darkness. Well done, as always, Sandy. All the best my friend. Be safe.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 4/11/2020 9:23:00 PM
Thank you so much...my first time with this form and the last entry in the contest... hugs and blessings :)

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