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Man under Milky Way | Milky way galaxy, Milky way, Landscape

Milky Way blooms bright - thought I'd rearrange the stars, for the moon looks quite lonely ... but that sea of suns - that deep, dark, endless abyss ... far too fine ... for earthly aims. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Pick-A-Title, Vol 15 - Sedoka" Poetry Contest, Edward Ibeh, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Strand No 730, Any Theme, Any Form" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor. ( Syllables = 5, 7, 7, 5, 7, 7, counted at HowManySyllables.com )

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Edward Ibeh

Date: 4/18/2020 4:57:00 PM

Congratulations on your first place win in my contest, Greg:-) Such a superb write. No wonder it won first place again in Brian's contest!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/19/2020 4:12:00 AM

Thank you SO kindly, Sir Edward - I am honored, and so pleased that you found my poem worthy! Blessings, Brother! :o)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/13/2020 1:02:00 PM

- Congratulations on a great winning poem in Edward Ibeh Sedoka contest, Gregory :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/19/2020 4:13:00 AM

Many kind thanks to you, Anne-Lise - I so appreciate it, my friend! :o) <3

Sandra Adams

Date: 4/11/2020 10:41:00 PM

great imagery and beautiful penning Greg.. congratulations on your win and Happy Easter... hugs

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/19/2020 4:13:00 AM

That's very kind of you, Sandra, and your opinion means a lot to me - blessings and Happy Easter, Dear Poet! :o) <3

John Watt

Date: 4/11/2020 9:13:00 PM

"That sea of suns" - you keep coming up with new ways to describe things I see all the time, but have never considered describing the way you do. It's a gift, and what makes you unique. Happy I saw this today - congrats on your #1 ~ John

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/19/2020 4:15:00 AM

Oh, thank you very much for that, John, I take pride in trying to create new imagery and word pairings, though it doesn't always work well, lol - blessings, my friend! :o)

Winged Warrior

Date: 4/11/2020 9:50:00 AM

Excellent sedoka Gregory...great entry...stay safe bro...and Happy Easter...The Wingster :o)

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/19/2020 4:15:00 AM

The same to you, My Poet Brother, and thank you so kindly for the wonderful comments! :o)

Jenish Somadas

Date: 4/11/2020 7:20:00 AM

Wonderful imagery.. Great poetry.. Good luck Greg..

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/19/2020 4:16:00 AM

Many kind thanks to you, Jenish - blessings, my friend! :o)