and post notes and photos about your poem like Gregory Richard Barden.
Milky Way blooms bright -
thought I'd rearrange the stars,
for the moon looks quite lonely ...
but that sea of suns -
that deep, dark, endless abyss ...
far too fine ... for earthly aims.
~ 1st Place ~ in the "Pick-A-Title, Vol 15 - Sedoka" Poetry Contest, Edward Ibeh, Judge & Sponsor.
~ 1st Place ~ in the "Strand No 730, Any Theme, Any Form" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.
( Syllables = 5, 7, 7, 5, 7, 7, counted at HowManySyllables.com )
Copyright © Gregory Richard Barden | Year Posted 2020
Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.
to post a comment