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Infinitude

Tears of dismay in A shroud that slowly withers Absence overshadows while Her life shatters. Love Was stolen, a heart broken As pursed lips sadly quiver An infinitude Of sorrow, death has stolen Whilst the holy earth has claimed A light refection That believed and inspired, now An infinity of light 3/23/2020 Pick-A-Title, Vol 15 - Sedoka - Poetry Contest 5,7,7,5,7,7 Sedoka, Title chosen; 2. Infinitude Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh

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Date: 4/18/2020 5:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest with this awesome sedoka, Eve:-) Loved it!
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Date: 4/13/2020 1:00:00 PM
- Congratulations on a great winning poem in Edward Ibeh Sedoka contest, dear Eve :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/13/2020 12:31:00 AM
Great win Eve.. Congrats..
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Date: 4/11/2020 9:18:00 PM
Wistful and beautiful to behold. "An infinity of light" such a wonderful line. Hope in the midst of loss. Great write, congrats on your win, Eve.
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Date: 3/27/2020 7:39:00 AM
Wow.
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Date: 3/25/2020 1:27:00 AM
This is really beautiful yet sad Eve. I hope it is a top winner for you! xxoo
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Date: 3/25/2020 12:24:00 AM
I don't believe I have ever before contemplated the word, 'infinitude' and I'm so happy it was brought to imagination's attention via such a tightly held flowing poem. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 3/24/2020 7:34:00 PM
You chose your words so poignantly. I wish you luck in the contest!
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Date: 3/24/2020 1:05:00 PM
Really good Eve, a fav...
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Date: 3/24/2020 10:47:00 AM
Life here is just the beginning. Great poem
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Date: 3/24/2020 9:14:00 AM
the sorrow of death is infinite, it never goes away we just learn how to live with it... hugs and blessings... stay well... great write, best wishes in the contest!
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Date: 3/24/2020 8:02:00 AM
Captivating and inspiring writing dearest, Eve. May God bless humanity. Hugs xxx
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Date: 3/23/2020 11:04:00 PM
Eve, your words really draw us into this experience of sorrow AND hope! Really nice entry. Good luck
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