Jenish Somadas Poet Sedoka

Infinitude

Like a spacious cloud
roving through infinite skies
my gentle soul wandering;
while body dissolves
into the five elements
abandoned by its owner.



Third Place in Pick-A-Title, Vol 15 - Sedoka - Poetry Contest sponsored by Edward Ibeh

Honorable Mention in STRAND PICK A,ANY THEME,ANY FORM Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Edward Ibeh April 18, 2020 at 5:31 PM Fantastic sedoka, Jenish:-) Congratulations on your third place win in my contest! Jenish Somadas April 18, 2020 at 10:35 PM Thank you Edward for your kind words.. Stay safe always..

Janice Canerdy April 13, 2020 at 1:09 PM A big CONGRATS on your win, Jenish! Janice Jenish Somadas April 13, 2020 at 10:24 PM Thank you Janice...

Anne-Lise Andresen April 13, 2020 at 12:50 PM - Congratulations on a great winning poem in Edward Ibeh Sedoka contest, Jenish :) - // Anne-Lise :) Jenish Somadas April 13, 2020 at 10:24 PM Thank you Anne..

Kim Rodrigues March 21, 2020 at 6:55 PM Wow! Jenish Somadas March 25, 2020 at 12:22 AM Thank you Kim...

Eve Roper March 18, 2020 at 10:21 AM A wonderful inspiration poem, Jenish, on the five basic elements: earth, water, fire, air, and space. Good luck in the contest a winner already. Jenish Somadas March 18, 2020 at 11:34 AM Your comment decorates my poem Eve.. Thank you..

Demetrios Trifiatis March 18, 2020 at 7:49 AM Spiritual insight well presented dearest, Jenish! Hugs xxx Jenish Somadas March 18, 2020 at 8:20 AM Thank you Demetrios..

Harry Horsman March 17, 2020 at 11:25 PM Powerful poetry, and a profound ending. Love this meaningful Sedoka. Jenish Somadas March 17, 2020 at 11:33 PM Thank you Harry for the delightful comment...

Line Gauthier March 17, 2020 at 8:59 AM Good one, Jenish. Jenish Somadas March 17, 2020 at 10:10 AM Thank you Line...

Vijay Pandit March 17, 2020 at 7:09 AM This is really great--so well articulated, Jenish. Jenish Somadas March 17, 2020 at 8:31 AM Thank you Vijay for your kind support...