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Infinitude

Like a spacious cloud roving through infinite skies my gentle soul wandering; while body dissolves into the five elements abandoned by its owner. Third Place in Pick-A-Title, Vol 15 - Sedoka - Poetry Contest sponsored by Edward Ibeh Honorable Mention in STRAND PICK A,ANY THEME,ANY FORM Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Date: 4/18/2020 5:31:00 PM
Fantastic sedoka, Jenish:-) Congratulations on your third place win in my contest!
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/18/2020 10:35:00 PM
Thank you Edward for your kind words.. Stay safe always..
Date: 4/13/2020 1:09:00 PM
A big CONGRATS on your win, Jenish! Janice
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/13/2020 10:24:00 PM
Thank you Janice...
Date: 4/13/2020 12:50:00 PM
- Congratulations on a great winning poem in Edward Ibeh Sedoka contest, Jenish :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/13/2020 10:24:00 PM
Thank you Anne..
Date: 3/21/2020 6:55:00 PM
Wow!
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/25/2020 12:22:00 AM
Thank you Kim...
Date: 3/18/2020 10:21:00 AM
A wonderful inspiration poem, Jenish, on the five basic elements: earth, water, fire, air, and space. Good luck in the contest a winner already.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/18/2020 11:34:00 AM
Your comment decorates my poem Eve.. Thank you..
Date: 3/18/2020 7:49:00 AM
Spiritual insight well presented dearest, Jenish! Hugs xxx
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/18/2020 8:20:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios..
Date: 3/17/2020 11:25:00 PM
Powerful poetry, and a profound ending. Love this meaningful Sedoka.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/17/2020 11:33:00 PM
Thank you Harry for the delightful comment...
Date: 3/17/2020 8:59:00 AM
Good one, Jenish.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/17/2020 10:10:00 AM
Thank you Line...
Date: 3/17/2020 7:09:00 AM
This is really great--so well articulated, Jenish.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/17/2020 8:31:00 AM
Thank you Vijay for your kind support...

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