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Testing these waters symmetry ever sanity release through poetry or trapped in hearts mind captivity Locked caged in this state frequently Will this world remember me or do I write pleasantries Intelligently disguising the pains Ive seen relieved by the comfort of serenity Sweat peace calms minds unease spills like water or winds breeze but who else could test these tests tied to dreams who else could write the world to cease who else can call the tempest from the seas Which ones will be tangled amongst the weeds Iv'e just one thing to leave the world Empty as me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/26/2015 6:41:00 PM
Something strange. WHen I think of infinity, I sometimes think of the word "empty" You are not alone. HOpe to see more of your poetic work !!
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Date: 12/20/2014 4:14:00 PM
Ryan, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy being part of the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, "WINTER POEMS" in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I look forward in following you and your poetry:) Enjoy the Christmas Holidays! From: your new poet friend@-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/20/2014 12:00:00 AM
Hi there..Welcome to this wonderful site of poetrysoup.So much to munch upon in your words.A powerful poem that makes me reflect about my own life,and what Im leaving behind once gone.Charma! : )
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Date: 12/19/2014 3:16:00 PM
Emptiness is a state of mind, yes? Not a healthy one either.:( Oh, I'm sure you will call these tempests from the sea, and order them elsewhere (not here, I hope:), Ryan! Welcome to the Soup, I'm so very sure you will love it here! Keep well, stay happy, Best wishes, Mikki
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Date: 12/11/2014 5:36:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Ryan - I choose your first sad, touching and well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too - Keep the PoetrySoup as a haven - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/12/2014 1:08:00 PM
Thank you Anne . Nice to meet you as well :) I will get the hang of the site soon
Date: 12/9/2014 10:38:00 AM
The key seems to be symmetry between poetry and serenity and the gap of the untold sadness that must be filled with love known from 1Corinth and 1John 4:8-16 beyond the pain,history and the song of solitude.Best regards,O.B
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Ryan Pike
Date: 12/9/2014 11:41:00 AM
Thank you . Powerful scriptures

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