Infidelity

When such lies are told
  trust flies out of the window,
   then love can turn cold
    and life is lived in shadow
     with lonely hearts left hollow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 3:10 AM
Another lovely write. You are one of my fav.
Neels Avatar
June 15, 2010 at 1:35 AM
This is to true... really enjoyed this June - luv WN
Knop Avatar
June 12, 2010 at 4:10 AM
Excellent Tanka and so TRUE!!! Thank you for your kind comment and have a nice weekend...Gert
Brown Avatar
June 11, 2010 at 12:00 PM
Your poetry was a pleasure to read today June. May your weekend be full of love,good health and loads of inspiration. Love, Carol
Reed Avatar
June 11, 2010 at 9:07 AM
How true! Trust is now imposssible and dreams shattered - forever. -Alan
Fone Avatar
June 11, 2010 at 8:33 AM
thanks, Dr Rem, Francine, this is only the second Tanka that I have written, it is a form I like, so thought I would try, I'm glad you like it!! J.
Roberts Avatar
June 11, 2010 at 7:51 AM
beautifully written
Mehta Avatar
June 11, 2010 at 7:36 AM
A very wonderful Tanks with nice images
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