Inferno Flames

It was about how I felt going
through the inferno The 
discoveries that were
made in ancient Italian times
The pieces coming together
completeing a mysterious puzzle, 
that was known by very few 
and still is today 

But someone ask as I question 
Could these burning flames 
be of eternal life refusing
to cease, I say if this is true
inferno flames between heaven
and earth shield the air 
I breathe' Raging fire cease
from burning release us 
from hell's gate where the shadows 

of death are not far behind
in its blurr of existence
I really don't think they get it
That thing at the bottom of the
inferno causing the flames
Where the shadow of death stalks
in this place It's not a joke where
someone can escape back to their 
Mamma and Daddy
as when they was a child

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 5/31/2009 3:22:00 PM
inferno flames-hope we dont ever have to face them not on earth and nor after we die--well penned--a great reminder that darkness exists --charma
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Date: 4/1/2009 8:51:00 AM
Good to see you back writting! Thanks for reading me. Is this verse about Hell? Light & Love
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Date: 3/30/2009 9:24:00 PM
Wow, Kevin, the images in this are dark and vivid. You hit the truth, this is not a joke and our destiny if we are not saved. Very poigniant piece. Thank you for your toughtful comment! Love, Robin
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