Infected Leg

work
the genes are stitching
  it is the gravity of the past
the weight of planets descending
invisible uncarpeted
  stairs

it is the man on land
  in asking why the drowning man
grasps at straws

the master looks on, very perturbed,
 distracted, as if
thinking of something else
   very busy

distracted by all the great effort, all the good things,
  he has wrought , in spite of
everyone else

with their skinners in the bossman's
pocket
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Toil Avatar
June 4, 2015 at 3:08 AM
a brilliant metaphor of the working man's experience of capitalism. the ends, it seems, would justify the means. great things "wrought" at the expense of "drowning men grasping at straws". Well done!
Dietrich Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 10:30 PM
your style is so different from mine, but I really enjoy this. Some parts of it I was able to get. I have a friend at Soup who likes poems a little cryptic. you should visit Rob Carmack!
Dietrich Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 10:28 PM
I agree with you about your comment on my pot head, it ought to be legal. I am dying to finally try it. hahaha. Let me read your poem now.
Miers Avatar
May 28, 2015 at 6:33 PM
funny.
Nunez Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 8:14 PM
This must be how many of the good-hearted employers feel. Like pulling a large log, but your metaphor is more powerful. Insightful, perceptive write, Michael. 7. Kim
Miers Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 8:41 PM
'labor is the source of all wealth and culture' Lassale this is more the perspective of the worker. I'm very glad you enjoyed it. thank you
A  Avatar
May 12, 2015 at 1:37 PM
good poem, enjoyed~luv skat~
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