Infant at the Hearth
I came where warmth had learnt to outlast flame,
Not by ascent, but by remaining near;
The vapour lifted, paused, then forgot my name,
As steam does—faithful only to the air.
The vessel bore the grammar of long hands:
Its rim worn thin by wrists that came and went.
One palm approached—then checked itself—no bans,
Just habit pausing into judgment spent.
This broth had practised patience twenty years;
I counted weeks—my age still learning weight.
Here time was tasted, not arranged in tiers:
What lingered longest proved itself most late.
A spoon mislaid its purpose in the air;
A line was read, misread, then left to cool.
My verse—still breathing—entered unaware,
Not finished, yet not asked to finish rule.
No sound accused the moment into law;
A nod occurred—small, private, easily missed.
Someone revised the word final with a drawl,
Then doubted even that, as cooks insist.
Thus sense accrues the way a broth turns dense:
By not insisting, by remaining there.
The carrot softens into acquiescence;
The onion learns the virtue of delay.
I broke my line—
it did not ask for pardon.
Not strong enough to prove, nor weak to flee;
It stayed, the way a bowl stays warm in kitchens
After the reason’s gone, but heat agrees.
So this—if names must be endured—is home:
Poetry Soup said softly, once, and set aside.
I ate among the old, unknown, unshown,
And found that belonging does not arrive—
it remains.
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