Inexorability

An Increase in Girth Leads Inexorably to--- A Decrease in Mirth ******** Or is it the Reverse?

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 4/6/2018 9:24:00 AM

Love the play of words you do so well!

Daniel Turner

Date: 4/3/2018 8:55:00 PM

Must be the reverse. Getting fatter has had no effect on my good nature, I was small in my youth and was the class clown. Now I'm fat and I'm still a clown, only a little more vulgar. A very fun read, Gershon.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/3/2018 5:18:00 PM

I guess it depends if its due to over eating or because a woman is expecting a baby lol:-) hugs jan xx

Susan Ashley

Date: 4/3/2018 5:07:00 PM

I love your inspired charm, Gershon :)) An excellent and enjoyable poem.. Warmest wishes. ~Susan

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 4/3/2018 3:11:00 PM

Your muse is heavily amused I see! Fun stuff :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/4/2018 12:05:00 PM

Yup. Your vision is 20:20 (or maybe better). Thanks for the visit, as always. Best wishes! :) gw