Inertia Frigidity



Step into the date-stamped time DeLorean,
move forward
on backward spinning nostalgia rims
Centrifugal hourglass ... 
short hand and long
Distorted view of time,
kinetic highway romantic destiny
Blurred future sideway images,
past memories rearview exit gone
Engine gunned to the max,
space curvature gives good distant
escape velocity
Point of reference
for the necessary fuel alibi 
goodbye synthesized
Faceless retrograde emotions
be nitro traction void vulcanized
Heart on a timer-delay standstill,
inertia frigidity
Frozen thoughts,
toss away the last empty bottle:
drained viscosity real liquid feelings
Feel the sub-zero wind chill 
of a refrigerated body,
another temporal roadkill
Only cardiac arrest
will take you to a stalled location
Pick a random course,
move on 
to the next unknown destination
Fate uncertain — 
Love theory is all relative
Outside of the winged doors,
birds of chance
perch watch on a deja vu branch
Waiting to draft on the breeze
of your exhaustion,
when your fuming desires run out of time
Passion entropy ... loss of heat
Mind settled comfortably
into inertia frigidity

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 6/25/2018 9:57:00 PM
This is just creative fun gone wild.. perfect word choices!
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Date: 6/25/2018 2:03:00 PM
Your vocabulary in this one is just excellent...
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Date: 6/25/2018 1:41:00 PM
You got me with the title, I had to repeat it three times to get it right. Freddie you must be an engineer or a jilted sportscar owner, well done...
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Date: 6/25/2018 11:46:00 AM
My fave line: perch watch on a deja vu branch
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