Inertia

Wheel of time turns fast
Life’s carriage speeds on whirlwind
At the edge of sunset sky
Through settled gold dust
Inertia will drive my will.
I’ll walk last mile in twilight.

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March 31, 2020
Syllable count : 577577 (HMS)
Contest : Bite Size Poem No. 42
Sponsored by : Line Gauthier
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Ibeh Avatar
April 18, 2020 at 5:15 PM
Excellent Sedoka, Subimal:-) Congratulations on your win in my contest!
Andresen Avatar
April 13, 2020 at 12:59 PM
- Congratulations on a great winning poem in Edward Ibeh Sedoka contest, Subimal :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Somadas Avatar
April 13, 2020 at 12:34 AM
Wonderful.. Inertia will drive my will.. Positive thoughts.. Great win Subimal..
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