Inept But tacit

My poems are like a river,
It may seem light and clear but if you get
through the lines then it will take you
to the depths of it.

I know they might seem unprofessional and
I would agree with that concurrently.
I have made it too lightly with the words
that one could read with a smile—
called the newborn baby,
Could recite before their daddies
and mummies.

I believe they would write
poetry of their own unspoken
thoughts before entering
their adult life and leave
the Juvenile mind behind,
because not everyone is
will to enjoy the juvenile life
through the poetic lines.
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Agustin Avatar
February 5, 2026 at 5:38 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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