Inept

I could write a thousand words
and still fail to capture your
absolute beauty.
A thousand verses of sublime
rhyme and fall short of the 
intent of my love for you.
A thousand dreams in the
glittering of stars, all is 
nought to where you take
me.
And the love song that I write
would only emulate the
beating of this heart, a long
slow pulse of absence.
I take the hand of my muse
in thought and feeling, ever
to caress that day when I
first said I loved you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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La France Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 8:37 AM
This is just enthralling and eloquent, I love the phrasing of your words, you would surely capture this girls heart with such beautiful poetry~~
Neels Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 7:42 AM
I absolutely love this romantic and expressive write of yours Daniel. Interesting title as well, thanks for the smiles.. Sweet indeed ~ Wilma
Poet Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 6:16 PM
What a romantic poet does reside in you Daniel! Wonderful poem.Happy New Year-kashinath
Kendrick Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 4:28 PM
So passionate and expressive work...I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve the romance lifts my spirits..Sara
Lusha Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 9:53 AM
Aaah sigh... as always in awe of the wonderous beauty , the delightful sentiment and completely in love with the words of love you write...Always your friend Allie...
Loving Iii Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 6:51 AM
titled perfectly. john h loving iii
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January 3, 2011 at 5:05 AM
Beautiful romantic write my friend...Enjoyed very much....Michael
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