Indulgence

Sun rises birds sing
indulge a craving for soul
first meal of the day



Indulgence - Poetry Contest
Sponsor	Shadow Hamilton
29 January,2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A   Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 9:52 PM
nice win...pd
A  Avatar
February 15, 2015 at 11:41 PM
Rajat, CONGRATULATIONS, in Shadow's indulgence contest! -LUV- SKAT
Allison Avatar
February 11, 2015 at 2:39 PM
Nice haiku many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Chutani Avatar
February 11, 2015 at 10:48 AM
nice early morning indulgence of the soul. Congrats Rajat. Mohan
Roper Avatar
February 11, 2015 at 9:43 AM
I love this meaningful poem,Rajat. I too love to indulge on the concerts of the birds in the morn and all day. Blessings dear friend Eve
Roper Avatar
February 11, 2015 at 9:44 AM
I forgot congratulations on your win and a 7
Lamoureux Avatar
February 11, 2015 at 8:49 AM
Very nice, congratulations!
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 11, 2015 at 8:34 AM
Congratulations on your winning haiku Rajat!
Relish Avatar
February 11, 2015 at 8:27 AM
Congrats on the win Rajat.. nad
Hamilton Avatar
February 11, 2015 at 7:15 AM
very nice Rajat congrats on win hugs
Smith Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 4:12 PM
A little food for thought...nice morning
Chakrabarty Avatar
January 31, 2015 at 7:06 AM
Lovely comments Tim. So nice of you. God bless.>rajat
Dietrich Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 2:08 PM
Does this mean to eat the bird? Heehee. that is what crossed my mind!!
Chakrabarty Avatar
January 31, 2015 at 6:57 AM
hahaha Sweet Andrea I love your craziness
Kendrick Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 12:21 PM
Yes, just a few glorious moments indulging the soul by watching the sun rise or watch the birds come to feed..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for stopping by..When I was around 7 years old, my parents bought an old run down farm..When the first rain came, the house leaked..We put out every pot and pan in the kitchen to catch the rain coming through the house..Almost like the song, "The Train Runs Through The Middle Of The House Since ..Sara
Chakrabarty Avatar
January 31, 2015 at 7:02 AM
Wonderful comments Sara. You are such a sweetie>love
Kendrick Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 12:22 PM
The Railroad Bought The Land"..SK
Manassian Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 11:11 AM
:) hello, Rajat...Lovely haiku....indulge the soul...Beautiful. Good luck in the contest.
Chakrabarty Avatar
January 31, 2015 at 7:04 AM
Thank you Wondera . Lovely comments.
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