Indomitable- Haiku Trilogy

Unstoppable sea
                                                Inextinguishable sun
                                                 Incandescent moon

                                                  Unending journey
                                              Unshakable foundation
                                                      Untiring love

                                                      Indomitable
                                              The essence of my spirit
                                                      Invincible ME
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Horsman Avatar
December 19, 2012 at 9:37 AM
both powerful and positive,, love these...
Manassian Avatar
December 19, 2012 at 12:44 PM
You are too kind, Harry! Hugs!
Dietrich Avatar
December 18, 2012 at 7:57 PM
wonderful use of adjectives!!
Manassian Avatar
December 18, 2012 at 9:49 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Great to hear from you! Hugs!
Bauer Avatar
December 18, 2012 at 5:00 PM
wonderful! love it!
Manassian Avatar
December 18, 2012 at 9:50 PM
Ilene...always a pleasure! :) Thanks for brightening my day!
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