Indomitable

Rain thunders ceaselessly
today great horses
in a furious affair
yet still a steady
sunshine burns radiant
and constant its resolve.

To tame such a wrath
such a din! It’s presence
an immovable ardent witness
to my so savage yearning
to my deep longing
my utter devotion.

A million assaults
all round gushing gashing
smashing slashing
flooding fast and yet
this prevalence in me
nearly indomitable
scarcely insuperable.

Though the torrents
seem a ruination yet
still stoically wells
within me this sum
this magnitude this
permanent totality
of mighty light
reigning steadfast
over me over all.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Labyrinth Avatar
December 20, 2020 at 1:57 PM
Such pace...I love love love this poem. Which had me at words go "Rain thunders ceaselessly today great horses in a furious affair yet still a steady sunshine burns radiant and constant its resolve."
Levasseur Avatar
December 20, 2020 at 2:55 PM
What can I say, it was raining torrentially, it begged me to write of it. You really are too kind. I can take criticism, though only in dr. recommended doses, haha.
Labyrinth Avatar
December 20, 2020 at 1:58 PM
Such beautiful, refined writing. I might add Divine. "Though the torrents seem a ruination yet still stoically wells within me this sum this magnitude this permanent totality of mighty light reigning steadfast over me over all."
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