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Indomitable

Rain thunders ceaselessly today great horses in a furious affair yet still a steady sunshine burns radiant and constant its resolve. To tame such a wrath such a din! It’s presence an immovable ardent witness to my so savage yearning to my deep longing my utter devotion. A million assaults all round gushing gashing smashing slashing flooding fast and yet this prevalence in me nearly indomitable scarcely insuperable. Though the torrents seem a ruination yet still stoically wells within me this sum this magnitude this permanent totality of mighty light reigning steadfast over me over all.

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Date: 12/20/2020 1:57:00 PM
Such pace...I love love love this poem. Which had me at words go "Rain thunders ceaselessly today great horses in a furious affair yet still a steady sunshine burns radiant and constant its resolve."
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Rob Levasseur
Date: 12/20/2020 2:55:00 PM
What can I say, it was raining torrentially, it begged me to write of it. You really are too kind. I can take criticism, though only in dr. recommended doses, haha.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 12/20/2020 1:58:00 PM
Such beautiful, refined writing. I might add Divine. "Though the torrents seem a ruination yet still stoically wells within me this sum this magnitude this permanent totality of mighty light reigning steadfast over me over all."

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