Indolent Thought

Aspirations and labor will tire your sinew
And when all the wearying drudgery is through
Some slovenly fool will give you a careless burial
And take charge of your estate – proud and imperial.

This is the thinking of a million languid loafers
Who expect to accede to some easy coffers
When some hardworking fellow of their blood dies,
To drink of their vines as they yield to worms and flies.

While the industrious son prays for father’s long life
The indolent one’s heart is ever filled with inner strife
When the old man’s health flourishes like wild grass,
Wondering why the old fella wants to outlive the stars.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Breidenthal Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 3:11 AM
Wow...powerful piece here. I really love the second stanza in particular. I am in awe of your work!! Amazing job! Always, Laura
Cervenka Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 4:41 PM
Very wise thoughts, for they are true to the end, sadly enough. Love your ending line but would look at changing the one before it to keep rhyme scheme intact. It will give more strength to your ending.~Jan
Harding Avatar
July 21, 2015 at 3:17 PM
Ooooh, I love this! So dark and defiant. Thank you for the visit earlier, Hann. xoxoxo
Clark Avatar
July 12, 2015 at 3:02 PM
Hi Hannington, well written verse and very poignant. Perhaps giving what one has to charity of one's choice is the better option!!
Mumo Avatar
July 14, 2015 at 4:30 AM
Correct. Thanks for your wise comment...
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