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Indifference

INDIFFERENCE



Battered by the hurricane of your
Indifference
My heart, hastily took refuge         
Into
The harbor of solitude! 



© Demetrios Trifiatis
16 SEPTEMBER 2013

Copyright © Demetrios Trifiatis | Year Posted 2013

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Gerald Kithinji Date: 9/27/2013 12:26:00 PM Nothing quite hurts like indifference. We know a great deal about the other emotions. Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 9/27/2013 1:16:00 PM Thank you, Gerald, for your visit! You are absolutely right!

Shadow Hamilton Date: 9/16/2013 2:32:00 PM hi Demetrios full of deep feelings and some hurt? really enjoyed it Shadow x smile Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 9/16/2013 3:07:00 PM Hello my dear, Shadow, so wonderful for you to visit, thank you so much! Do not worry!

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 9/16/2013 2:06:00 PM This is sad, but still nice. Smile - we love you here at P.S. . Today I'm sad - It would have been my Anniversary. Thanks for sharing. Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 9/16/2013 3:06:00 PM Hi, Lucy, so nice to see you again! I am so sorry that you cannot be with the person you have shared your life and celebrate your Anniversary! Thank you for visiting!

Eileen Manassian Date: 9/16/2013 1:24:00 PM I in NOW WAY meant to say that this was not a BEAUTIFUL piece in its own right! You KNOW...I love you work.... Login to Reply

Eileen Manassian Date: 9/16/2013 1:24:00 PM I in NOW WAY meant to say that this was not a BEAUTIFUL piece in its own right! You KNOW...I love you work.... Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 9/16/2013 3:03:00 PM I know ,Eileen that you didn't mean something like that, I really do!

Jack Ellison Date: 9/16/2013 9:57:00 AM WOW! As Eileen said... such a sad write! Bring back those beautiful love poems! Cheers, your Canadian compatriot! Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 9/16/2013 12:29:00 PM My friend and compatriot, Jack, hello. First I would like to thank you for your visit and comment that I am certain it comes from your heart as it does Eileen's comment! Since you both wish me to return to the romantic writing I would make an effort from time to time to do so, however, you both know that life is not only laughter but tears as well and I for one cannot overlook that fact from time to time! Thank you again my friend!

Russell Sivey Date: 9/16/2013 5:30:00 AM I think the greatest two words within this poem is certainly "Indifference" the main theme of this incredible write, and "solitude" the overall goal of this write, at least that is what it seems to be to me! This piece make so much sense to me, it seems that I might be within a hurricane of life that batters me, at least of the past month! This amazing poem means a lot to me and it's significance is remarkable! I really loved reading this magnificent verse this morning, Great Work!! Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 9/16/2013 5:49:00 AM You are absolutely right my dear friend, Russell. "Indifference" and " Solitude" are the two words that I contrast to give dynamism and harmony to this little Epigram of mine. Thank you for visiting and I am happy you liked it!

Eileen Manassian Date: 9/16/2013 3:52:00 AM My dear poet, this is a very sad write...I miss the romantic writes you used to pen that brought light and joy and life. Please, oblige and write another such masterpiece...Me agapi...H Mykrouli Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 9/16/2013 5:02:00 AM Well, my dearest, although I would agree with you about the content I would like to say that even sadness and unhappiness can create beautiful writing. Of course, I do not claim that this little poem of mine is worthy but I am happy to have written it! Thank you for your visit and for being there!