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Indifference

INDIFFERENCE



Battered by the hurricane of your
Indifference
My heart, hastily took refuge         
Into
The harbor of solitude! 



© Demetrios Trifiatis
16 SEPTEMBER 2013

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Gerald Kithinji

September 27, 2013 at 12:26 PM

Nothing quite hurts like indifference. We know a great deal about the other emotions.

Demetrios Trifiatis

September 27, 2013 at 1:16 PM

Thank you, Gerald, for your visit! You are absolutely right!

Shadow Hamilton

September 16, 2013 at 2:32 PM

hi Demetrios full of deep feelings and some hurt? really enjoyed it Shadow x smile

Demetrios Trifiatis

September 16, 2013 at 3:07 PM

Hello my dear, Shadow, so wonderful for you to visit, thank you so much! Do not worry!

Lucilla Carrillo

September 16, 2013 at 2:06 PM

This is sad, but still nice. Smile - we love you here at P.S. . Today I'm sad - It would have been my Anniversary. Thanks for sharing.

Demetrios Trifiatis

September 16, 2013 at 3:06 PM

Hi, Lucy, so nice to see you again! I am so sorry that you cannot be with the person you have shared your life and celebrate your Anniversary! Thank you for visiting!

Eileen Manassian

September 16, 2013 at 1:24 PM

I in NOW WAY meant to say that this was not a BEAUTIFUL piece in its own right! You KNOW...I love you work....

Demetrios Trifiatis

September 16, 2013 at 3:03 PM

I know ,Eileen that you didn't mean something like that, I really do!

Eileen Manassian

September 16, 2013 at 1:24 PM

I in NOW WAY meant to say that this was not a BEAUTIFUL piece in its own right! You KNOW...I love you work....

Jack Ellison

September 16, 2013 at 9:57 AM

WOW! As Eileen said... such a sad write! Bring back those beautiful love poems! Cheers, your Canadian compatriot!

Demetrios Trifiatis

September 16, 2013 at 12:29 PM

My friend and compatriot, Jack, hello. First I would like to thank you for your visit and comment that I am certain it comes from your heart as it does Eileen's comment! Since you both wish me to return to the romantic writing I would make an effort from time to time to do so, however, you both know that life is not only laughter but tears as well and I for one cannot overlook that fact from time to time! Thank you again my friend!

Russell Sivey

September 16, 2013 at 5:30 AM

I think the greatest two words within this poem is certainly "Indifference" the main theme of this incredible write, and "solitude" the overall goal of this write, at least that is what it seems to be to me! This piece make so much sense to me, it seems that I might be within a hurricane of life that batters me, at least of the past month! This amazing poem means a lot to me and it's significance is remarkable! I really loved reading this magnificent verse this morning, Great Work!!

Demetrios Trifiatis

September 16, 2013 at 5:49 AM

You are absolutely right my dear friend, Russell. "Indifference" and " Solitude" are the two words that I contrast to give dynamism and harmony to this little Epigram of mine. Thank you for visiting and I am happy you liked it!

Eileen Manassian

September 16, 2013 at 3:52 AM

My dear poet, this is a very sad write...I miss the romantic writes you used to pen that brought light and joy and life. Please, oblige and write another such masterpiece...Me agapi...H Mykrouli

Demetrios Trifiatis

September 16, 2013 at 5:02 AM

Well, my dearest, although I would agree with you about the content I would like to say that even sadness and unhappiness can create beautiful writing. Of course, I do not claim that this little poem of mine is worthy but I am happy to have written it! Thank you for your visit and for being there!

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