Indian Summer

Incredible warmth at October’s end kisses GoddesS
Nature, and the only thing I can think about is yoU
Do you recall the time we first met so like a dreaM?
I saw you, and a poem inside me started to blooM.
A calm like that beautiful day began to caress mE.
Nestled in your arms, I lingered in sweet wondeR.
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May Avatar
July 7, 2024 at 5:45 AM
Lovely write Andrea, Congrats on your win
Healey Avatar
July 6, 2024 at 1:19 PM
This acrostic is just gorgeous, Andrea. Well done and congratulations on your winning placement. At least 3 of us (you, me and Crystol) wrote about autumn for this contest! Hmmm! Very interesting! (lol) Cheers from Canada, Jim.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 6, 2024 at 1:17 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Indian Summer" Double Acrostic write again.  Have a great day/weekend..............
George Avatar
July 1, 2024 at 9:47 PM
A beautiful poem of love and longing. Very ingeniously done. All the Best dear Andrea.
Canerdy Avatar
July 1, 2024 at 3:18 PM
Excellent~~skillfully written and very moving, Andrea. Janice
Goldsmith Avatar
July 1, 2024 at 11:33 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Indian Summer" write. You did a great job here. I found this Double Acrostic to take extra time/thought. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a great day writing away..............
Narain Avatar
July 1, 2024 at 11:20 AM
Nice Acrostic at both end.
Miller Avatar
July 1, 2024 at 2:09 AM
Wow you cracked this one, well done
Bauer Avatar
June 30, 2024 at 3:55 PM
andrea - this is so creatively done! I've never seen an acrostic done this way and you have knocked it out of the park!
Dietrich Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 9:33 AM
Thanks so much
One Avatar
June 30, 2024 at 1:17 PM
Nicely done Andrea.. I've not even thought about how I will do this one or the theme.. Have very little time for poetry in the summer... Best of luck..
Dietrich Avatar
June 30, 2024 at 2:14 PM
thanks. you gotta do this one. it's so fun.
Empress Avatar
June 30, 2024 at 11:29 AM
Oh gosh iv always wanted to do a double acrostic, i hope this contest wont close before i can write one as life is at the moment hectic. “ I saw you, and a poem inside me started to blooM. A calm like that beautiful day began to caress mE.” this resonates with me and i just loveeee it!! Gosh this made me sigh! A fave it is! BOL
Dietrich Avatar
June 30, 2024 at 2:15 PM
I think I've done maybe three before. I really enjoy these kinds of challenges Get started on it. And thanks for liking it.
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