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Independence

Individual choices.. Identities allowed No King to rule.. to none we bow Determined are you to reach the top Each of us can rise or flop Perhaps you're one who doesn't care Even that's allowed.. It is! I swear! No one will ever force you to matter Dance if you would at the foot of my ladder Energy and drive heeds freedoms call New recruits prepared to fall Can we ever forget the price they pay Ever thankful for Independence day!

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Date: 7/3/2010 2:07:00 PM
A wonderful Acrostic for July 4th .. Patricia and great points in every line .. to linger and digest.. enjoyed and happy weekend celebration to u.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii..AlohA...
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Date: 7/3/2010 12:10:00 PM
I love it; just love it! The essence of this acrostic regarding Independence is just awesome. The words flow very well and the message is just inspiring and fantastic. Great job! Joseph
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