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Indecision

Should I stay or go
Plunge into the ocean's depths
Where the unknown waits


* For Raul's "Journey" challenge

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Kash Poet

Date: 5/28/2011 2:47:00 PM

Very good Haiku.....

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 5/11/2010 7:28:00 AM

Nice! :) x

Lynette Chachere

Date: 5/8/2010 10:13:00 PM

i like how you word this. should i stay or leave it all behind. starting anew and falling into a new life of water, that you aren't sure what might happen with, it's all at risk, and chance. i love this haiku, and anything to do with journey.thanks on your comment Carolyn, you understand it well on a deep level.that makes my day.have a great night. --Always

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 5/3/2010 1:36:00 PM

I am in thomaston, Ga (central Ga.) You are in PC, Florida, right, if my memory serves me today? Can you tell anything about the oil spill? that is such a mess, and just crazy.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 4/29/2010 4:33:00 AM

Appreciated reading your Haiku, Carolyn! And thank you for your comments...Love, Gert

Lucinda Bulger

Date: 4/28/2010 1:52:00 PM

Very good poem.. Having a tremendously enlightening day, it is gorgeous here... Think I'll stay 4 awhile! Take care, have a wonderful Spring, it has definitely sprung!!! :) by the way, Carolyn, the song about my son, the lyrics to "the river is calm child, 72 hrs after posting it on a 200,00 pro. writers site, #1 out of 77! I am thrilled! :) Out of the area, so having some issues, may just put a couple on Kevin's Cd, who knows? Wish me luck! Blessings to u, and everyone there, Cindy

Lucinda Bulger

Date: 4/28/2010 1:44:00 PM

"Should I stay or should I go now? Should I stay or should I go now? If I go it will be trouble, if I stay it will be double! So you got to let me know... should I stay or should I go?!" that was Cindy's rock moment inspired by the old punk band the "clash" yeah, always had a problem with the going part but believe me not the scenerio with my love, Mr. Welch, kind of the other way.. Our last encounter: He is screaming out the back door "When's it going to be Cindy, another 5 f-ing years?!"LOVE

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 4/27/2010 8:43:00 AM

Hey Carolyn, Thx for your always kind comments on my writes! Truly appreciated....hugs, Jimmy

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 4/26/2010 8:37:00 PM

Great creation of a Haiku, Carolyn! Good luck on the contest. All the best, Caroline.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/26/2010 5:08:00 PM

You should stay Caroyln.We should all stay at the soup.... and make it what it used to be....Fraser,you,Ruben,Me:)..too much......We are soupers sweetie and soupers can bubble,can frottle,but they are SOUPERS....stay!:)

Danny Nunn

Date: 4/26/2010 6:11:00 AM

That is about what I do everyday, good write...thanks on "Brain Washing" the satanic thing is one of America's big things they keep quiet..that is why a lot of my poems are on drug and that...Thanks Danny

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/25/2010 8:32:00 AM

Thankxxx Carolyn... John was a darling guy and a wonderful helping hand kinda man and had just found the girl of his dreams and was so excited and we spoke twice a week for many years and I am still in shock as we were all to go to dinner tonight to celebrate his upcoming wedding and his Mom called me as it happened at her home and well who knows why these things happen and to the nicest people..thankxxx for your special comments today..luv.. Linda-Marie

Daver Austin

Date: 4/25/2010 8:14:00 AM

I wrote a poem on this subject which I'll post tomorrow probably. This is multi-faceted. I like the challenge. Love, Dave

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/24/2010 8:00:00 PM

YOu did well with this challenge, Carolyn! You put the unknown in the sea and I put it on remaining onland to get killed by humans. haha. LUv andrea