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Incredible Dew

Incredible; Dew — Clinging to a blade of grass; Magnifying the shade of green; Intensifying the brightness of the sun; Gazing in I see myself. Reflections turn inward, Cells; Microscopic bits; A nucleus As the blade of grass itself becomes a mere cell in the vast earth spreading before my soul, Touching it – Teasing it – Coaxing out primal instincts – Memories of new earth that can’t be remembered But are there – Almost awake – Sensing the pleasure of the first perfect morning laid down by the hand of God.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/18/2015 8:11:00 AM
So beautiful. Congrats!
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Date: 7/15/2015 1:23:00 PM
Turning inward you discover everything is connected, Love the way you have captured that truth. Congrats on this stunning piece being featured. Love, daver
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Daver Austin
Date: 7/24/2015 3:33:00 PM
I have painted too, mostly acrylic. Am in awe of those who can paint in water color. Love, daver
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Judith Angell Meyer
Date: 7/15/2015 6:36:00 PM
Thank you saver! I have really enjoyed following your comments. They are sometimes like poetry themselves. I believe that partly at least, comes from my observation as an artist. I am a nature/wildlife watercolorist. ~J~
Date: 7/13/2015 12:52:00 AM
JUDITH, Congratulations on having your poem featured this coming week. **SKAT**
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Judith Angell Meyer
Date: 7/15/2015 6:38:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by to comment. ~J~
Date: 6/20/2010 5:32:00 AM
An incredibly wonderful poem. Why haven't I seen you before. I see you haven't been given much encouragement. WOW! You are so talented! Wonderful to see that someone can go beyond the "poor little me" stuff. I am such a fan. Love, daver
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Date: 10/31/2009 2:38:00 PM
Great imagery here, Judith !! Been awhile since you've posted here at the Soup. Hope you return soon with more great writing!!
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Date: 8/21/2009 12:42:00 PM
WOW, where did this come from? This is incredible Mom! I love the inward voyage back to the "primal instincts" ... great poem! ~Tru~
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Date: 8/18/2009 6:12:00 AM
Incredible Dew makes for an incredible write. Beautiful Judith thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/17/2009 4:18:00 PM
Beautifully written and thoughtful . I use to take pictures of raindrops and dew drops to try to get the picture that was reflected in them. My vision is not what it use to be and it is hard to see the reflections now. I like the fact that you include your faith in the poem. Keep writing. Sara
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