Incredible

A pulse to beat a climb repeat

The clock would tick a trip to feet
A light in peril remorse new leaf
A branch to pull the heaven's beat
A calm will chime a reasonable touch of rhyme

Incredible

A culture of death treasured with lies,

To meditate along lines of fate
A hand to hold the ocean sway
In viable degree of common decay
With heart to pulse in silence torn degree

Shadows in darkened holes pierced in inner brevity;

Incredible heart to dismiss with fear
A hand to hold the call is drawn near;

To help summon its beckoning call with tear

Incredible
A heart trained to meditate
In glance of fate with chattered fate
To plunge asunder through wings of solace

Incredible

So is the human spirit twisted in solemn regard to illusion
With my writing I can finally escape
To reach the goal attentive to a much better place
In a quest toward that final rest
With wings resting in angelic fervor toward heavens gate
Outside are screams of demon means with shattered hearts of glass
In darkened portals of haunted demise through rock ledge pillars of evil eyes
With tongues of asps shattered glass in vile desolation & regret
Incredible

A sought after adaptation leading into its eternal abyss at last to doom awaits!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 5/10/2012 2:58:00 PM
Mario, this poem impress me - completed ! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/9/2012 6:53:00 PM
Smile ˜ Admire The Classic Taste Amid This Excellent & Profound Verse, My Dear Precious Friend * And He Cried Out But They Said Do Not Bother THE MASTER, Yet He Cried Out Even More * "What Is It You ME To Do For You?" * That I May See * My Love to You, John!:) ˜
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Date: 5/9/2012 6:56:00 PM
...."Tis Suppose To Read, 'What Is It That You Wish For ME To Do For 'You?'" *
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