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Would I be able to expand my wings? I walk around the mists. I do stunts in the breeze. I console the powers of murkiness. Arrange the resulting time frames As in chess, for evident reasons. A raindrop lands on my courtyard. Each day, I water my day dawn. I usually appreciate some water on the lawn. A connection between ordinary associations. Appearing late, everything is pushed back.

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Date: 6/21/2021 12:01:00 PM
A gorgeous poem and picture, Lasaad. Enjoy your week, my friend, Evelyn
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Date: 6/21/2021 5:01:00 AM
You have blessing of nature's beauty--enjoyed the read, Lasaad.
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Date: 6/21/2021 4:52:00 AM
An apotheosis of uplifting poetry, my friend, Lasaad! Blessings.
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Date: 6/21/2021 1:23:00 AM
You write such beautiful poetry. I liked the watering of the lawn. Here in Malta, we have no lawns. Only corrupt concrete.
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