Notes About The Poem

Written 1/19/25 for Bitesize #98 poetry contest sponsor Line Gauthier

Inconsolable

Eyes shine like moon 
Envelopes like cocoon
Face of teary monsoon 
Mourning loss of life
Reeling difficult time
Healing not in sight
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Wolf Avatar
January 19, 2025 at 8:57 PM
First three lines move me -- Rocky Raccoon
Jones Avatar
January 20, 2025 at 4:07 AM
Thanks for reading Gershon!
Read Avatar
January 19, 2025 at 4:07 AM
Hi Karen, mourning the loss of life, is something we all have to deal with in our lives, all the best in the contest. xx
Jones Avatar
January 19, 2025 at 5:53 AM
Thanks John
Buhagiar Avatar
January 19, 2025 at 2:04 AM
Time heals all wounds. Never give up.
Jones Avatar
January 19, 2025 at 2:27 AM
Hugs Victor
Mckeithan Avatar
January 19, 2025 at 1:51 AM
Nice one Karen. Like how you use the rhymes in this bite size poem.
Jones Avatar
January 19, 2025 at 1:55 AM
Thank you kindly Oliver!
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