Incomplete Day

My days not complete,
never kissed my sweet good night.
I can't sleep without.

2nd version

I can't sleep tonight,
never kissed my sweet good night.
My days not complete.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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De Paz Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 4:22 AM
I feel this way too!
Kyriacou Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 12:44 PM
short sweet nice :)
Hapworth Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 1:20 PM
Thank you.
Andresen Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 3:40 AM
- Touching and sweet haiku, Adam. - Well done! - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Hapworth Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 8:12 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise :)
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