Incomplete

It wasn't just an evening stroll, 
for God was hiding, and I thought to meet him 
there, on his own ground. 
I heard that he was everywhere; 
were I to give him half a chance,  
he might appear. 
 
The way was much less clear; at length 
I chose a suicidal stream that in its progress  
guided me across the plain,  
gaining in elan, 
before the precipice appeared. 
 
But in its last crescendo, 
there was only stillness that I saw  
subsumed within the waterfall  
in little glimpses,   
dashing to the stones. 
                ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Bauer Avatar
October 24, 2012 at 10:15 AM
wonderful! i'm impressed!
Ludden Avatar
October 24, 2012 at 11:53 AM
You're the impressive one, Ilene, kind even to my ditties...but you keep me motivated.
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