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Inclement


Icy  f r o z e n  outside,
          idle and listless days.
Idyllic summer  D R E A M S,
           illusions in my mind . . . 
IMMENSE  the walls of snow!
   Imposing  w i n t e r ,  that
          imprisons and inspires . . .

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February 24, 2017

Poetry/Pleiades/Verse/Inclement
Copyright Protected, ID 17- 879-919-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym. 

For the contest, Pleiades I
Sponsor, Kim Merryman

Second Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Martin Avatar
March 4, 2017 at 3:04 PM
Glad we missed the immense walls of snow this year. Congratulations on your win with this great poem BW! :-)
Krampe Avatar
March 1, 2017 at 6:46 PM
"that imprisons and inspires" - lovely way to look at winter. Congrats on your win.
Allison Avatar
March 1, 2017 at 5:38 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Constance :-) hugs Jan xx
Leiser Avatar
March 1, 2017 at 3:51 PM
Your creativity always shines, Constance! Congrats on your win :)
Dietrich Avatar
March 1, 2017 at 3:26 PM
wow, Constance. you chose a unique word and really made it sing! Love this one. Congrats.
Merryman Avatar
March 1, 2017 at 10:49 AM
A beautiful and creative look at winter weather, Constance! Congrats on your 3rd place win! Blessings, Kim
Chansarkar Avatar
March 1, 2017 at 10:01 AM
Loved the last line the most Broken!Congrats on your win!
Andresen Avatar
March 1, 2017 at 3:39 AM
- Congratulations on your great win in Pleiades I contest, B.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Barden Avatar
March 1, 2017 at 1:48 AM
Oh, I can SO relate - nicely phrased - congrats!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 28, 2017 at 10:14 PM
Feel cold after reading this. Brr...congrats!
Roper Avatar
February 28, 2017 at 9:35 PM
Very good, Broken Wings, congratulations on your win :)
Andresen Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 12:17 PM
- A cold winter picture ... great pleiades B.W. - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Vinson Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 6:12 PM
Constance, what a great view of winter - sitting here in warm comfort, anyway. Gotta love the seasons. : )
La France Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 9:31 AM
Doug, I live in Canada so you have to either embrace the snow or hibernate, thanks for visiting
Allison Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 7:51 AM
Wow you sure have been inspired by the inclement weather - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
La France Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 6:09 PM
Jan, thanks for the comment, oh we still have mountains of snow !
Smith Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 10:23 PM
Burr, well done BW, best wishes in the contest...
La France Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 7:48 AM
CHARLIE thanks so much for visiting!
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