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Icy f r o z e n outside, idle and listless days. Idyllic summer D R E A M S, illusions in my mind . . . IMMENSE the walls of snow! Imposing w i n t e r , that imprisons and inspires . . . ___________________ February 24, 2017 Poetry/Pleiades/Verse/Inclement Copyright Protected, ID 17- 879-919-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Pleiades I Sponsor, Kim Merryman Second Place

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Date: 3/4/2017 3:04:00 PM
Glad we missed the immense walls of snow this year. Congratulations on your win with this great poem BW! :-)
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Date: 3/1/2017 6:46:00 PM
"that imprisons and inspires" - lovely way to look at winter. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/1/2017 5:38:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Constance :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/1/2017 3:51:00 PM
Your creativity always shines, Constance! Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 3/1/2017 3:26:00 PM
wow, Constance. you chose a unique word and really made it sing! Love this one. Congrats.
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Date: 3/1/2017 10:49:00 AM
A beautiful and creative look at winter weather, Constance! Congrats on your 3rd place win! Blessings, Kim
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Date: 3/1/2017 10:01:00 AM
Loved the last line the most Broken!Congrats on your win!
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Date: 3/1/2017 3:39:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great win in Pleiades I contest, B.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/1/2017 1:48:00 AM
Oh, I can SO relate - nicely phrased - congrats!
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Date: 2/28/2017 10:14:00 PM
Feel cold after reading this. Brr...congrats!
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Date: 2/28/2017 9:35:00 PM
Very good, Broken Wings, congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 2/26/2017 12:17:00 PM
- A cold winter picture ... great pleiades B.W. - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/25/2017 6:12:00 PM
Constance, what a great view of winter - sitting here in warm comfort, anyway. Gotta love the seasons. : )
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Date: 2/26/2017 9:31:00 AM
Doug, I live in Canada so you have to either embrace the snow or hibernate, thanks for visiting
Date: 2/25/2017 7:51:00 AM
Wow you sure have been inspired by the inclement weather - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/25/2017 6:09:00 PM
Jan, thanks for the comment, oh we still have mountains of snow !
Date: 2/24/2017 10:23:00 PM
Burr, well done BW, best wishes in the contest...
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Date: 2/25/2017 7:48:00 AM
CHARLIE thanks so much for visiting!

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