Incinerated

You
incinerated me
embracing me like
the inferno of Hades
burning away
my walls
my defences

See my need
within
the depths of my eye
feel my longing
as my body quivers
taste my love
with each fiery kiss

Hear me
cry out to you
in silent pleading
let me not
be consumed
In the smoldering ashes
of apathy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Lehman Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 5:39 PM
Wow, beautifully written!
Wolves Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 8:40 PM
You are way to kind dear poetess
Bush Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 10:30 PM
Lust & love, four letters each, so easy to mix up. Beautifully done.
Dietrich Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 8:54 PM
wow, smoldering apathy. what a great contrast of words you put together there, Exquisite!
Wolves Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 4:44 AM
Thank you very, very, much kind Lady...
Adams Avatar
January 1, 2020 at 9:05 PM
wow....powerful... a flame burns bright but often burns out leaving us as we were before... good write!
Wolves Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 4:16 AM
Thank you dear Lady. To often lust is mistaken for love. The consequences of that mistake can be devastating.
Krutsinger Avatar
January 1, 2020 at 5:12 PM
She knows you much better now, and I feel I do also! Wow!
Wolves Avatar
January 1, 2020 at 6:47 PM
Thanks, but I don't write this kind of poem about anyone in particular. I've been on my own for 10 years now.
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