Inchoate Panorama

A lot to say that has never been heard, 
Just Listen silently to the inchoate panorama.... 

That rebilious child, 
That spring will shoot out soon
Wanting to wander in the wild...... 

That old man in that  coffin waiting, 
For the day of redemption
To see the world suffering that whole life he has hated...... 

That woman bound in cages, 
The confetti waiting for the wind to blow it away
Who has not seen sun since ages...... 

That soldier fighting for the nation,
Urges to see atleast once his new born child
But deying was imposed on him as his destination...... 

Still you think you know much? 
Listen, just listen to the inchoate panorama my friend.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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September 13, 2024 at 2:16 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 12, 2018 at 2:44 PM
Deep poem Shritika..
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