Inches Apart and An Honest Heart

They stood inches apart 
Both having a racing heart 
Gazing into the eyes 
With absolutely no reason for lies 

They met weeks ago 
Very busy and on the go 
A date with a drink 
In front of a romantic slippery frozen ice rink 

Now they were inches apart 
With a beating heart 
Mature tasks
Challenged them to wear symbolic masks

Putting aside this reality façade 
For a moment worthy of a cry 
Choosing a setting filled with floral arrangements 
The two enjoyed the lunchtime flowerlike engagement

Having no words 
Listening to the chirping from the birds 
‘I do’ she said 
“I guess now we can wed” 
Was the remark he did say 
Knowing soon there be a wedding day 

Bonded together 
Realizing life’s weather was getting better 
He put a ring on her finger 
While in the background an audio played words breathed by a singer 
Nervously she shook 
While he was on his knees she proudly stood 

Inches apart 
Remembering the honest that beat in the heart 
She returned to the collegiate academic look 
Freeing him to return to the business suit to manipulate the investment books
 
But when the moon light glowed 
Honesty returned to the young girl’s beau 
Who she met during an innocent supportive act 
That changed his pinstripe tact
 
It was a lucky chance 
Choreographed as a lifelong dance 
When she bumped into the well-grounded gold 
Making her emotional guard fold 

Inches apart 
A church audience listened to the romance in the beating heart 
Watching them commit to this start 
He in black she in white 
A decision based on true love that was right

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 4/17/2020 1:29:00 PM
Hello Marc O'Brien, an enjoyable poem of true love. Have a nice day my friend. Be safe.
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Date: 4/16/2020 7:41:00 PM
A gorgeous write that honors a traditional ceremony that honors true love and commitment,
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