Sara Kendrick Poet Dizain

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Incandescence

Lover heated to incandescence, gasp
Tries to break away, runs, trips, falls, tumbles
In uncertainty's way, lands, yet is clasp
By the tight controls of passions,  mumbles
Knows this relationship already crumbles  

Incandescence heats a wire to glow
Passion's fieriness in eyes' windows show
Lovers' light with flames shining like stars bright
'Til the first problem cast lovers into throes
Will their passion join them, their foe to fight? 

Written: August 09, 2020
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh
Title Chosen: Incandescence

Incandescence: noun; One definition for incandescence is Full of strong emotion, passionate..

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M. L. Kiser September 22, 2020 at 1:32 PM Quite beautiful, extremely well penned. Very nice.

Jennifer Proxenos September 22, 2020 at 11:17 AM This poem is creatively beautiful - absolutely awesome, I have no doubt it will win my talented friend. Hugs and blessings Sara, Jennifer. Sara Kendrick September 22, 2020 at 1:10 PM Jennifer, Your comments are uplifting. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

Gary Bateman September 20, 2020 at 12:55 PM Hello Sara, You Dizain poem here on "Incandescence" is most excellent -- full of passion and emotion!! Love is a very important emotion. You speak to its "uncertainty" very well. Enjoyed your poem very much!! Cheers and Best, Gary Sara Kendrick September 20, 2020 at 3:05 PM Gary, Your presence at my work is encouraging. Thanks for dropping by. Yes, love is uncertain especially with some people. Sara

Regina Mcintosh September 20, 2020 at 4:57 AM This is beautiful and I enjoyed it so much. God bless you dear friend. I appreciate your kindness and personality in poetry and verse. Love and prayers, Gina Sara Kendrick September 20, 2020 at 9:08 AM Regina, Your comment is a very uplifting one. I appreciate you dropping by. I am glad that you enjoyed reading my work. Sara

Paghunda Zahid September 18, 2020 at 1:29 PM Thought provoking.. How well you have expressed the uncertainty of love. Beautifully penned Sara Kendrick September 20, 2020 at 9:04 AM Paghunda, Thanks for the kind review of my work. I appreciate you taking the time to comment. Sara

Andrea Dietrich September 15, 2020 at 2:57 PM sorry about your pain with the carpel tunnel. I have stuff nobody can even diagnose. LIfe can sure get weird!! Sara Kendrick September 17, 2020 at 5:55 AM Thanks for dropping by. Well, you have something that has doctors stumped. I bet they won't admit it. Sara

Judy Ball September 14, 2020 at 5:55 AM Well done Sara. Sounds like he knows this is not meant to be and is trying to get away as best he can. Lust can be a hard foe to beat. great job here. God Bess, JB

Joseph May September 13, 2020 at 4:24 PM Love glows in the heat of passion. Wonderful write Sara..

Andrea Dietrich September 13, 2020 at 1:57 PM just now reading of your carpet tunnel. Sorry about that. I had a form of it. I was still able to write but other things were so uncomfortable!! Sara Kendrick September 13, 2020 at 3:33 PM Andrea, My carpal tunnel thing had been off and on for years then it started up again and it has stayed. The pain is was awful at night which meant sleepless nights. I went to the doctor before we were told to stay at home because of the pandemic and he did the injections in my hand and I got some relief for about 5 months. It has been back for about two months. It is some better but the numbness in my thumb and pointer finger is still there and one side of my ring finger is partly numb. SK

Victor Buhagiar September 13, 2020 at 1:02 PM One always hope that love endures. Loved your poem. Missed you. ~~ Sara Kendrick September 13, 2020 at 3:27 PM Victor, Thanks for dropping by and taking time to read and comment on my work. I am glad that you enjoyed the poem. I have missed all of you here on soup. Sara

Judy Ball August 25, 2020 at 10:20 AM A fine poem relating the uncertainty of new love. Will their passions join them to fight their foe. Often it tears them apart. Great job her. God Bless, JB Sara Kendrick September 13, 2020 at 6:14 AM Judy, I hope that their love goes on and on. Thanks for dropping by. SK

Jennifer Proxenos August 23, 2020 at 8:31 AM Wonderful imagery in this poem Sara, I wish you all the best in the contest. Hugs and Blessings, Jennifer. Sara Kendrick September 13, 2020 at 6:14 AM Jennifer, Thanks for all the visits to my poems and taking the time to comment. Your comment encourage. SK

M. L. Kiser August 13, 2020 at 6:54 PM Quite beautifully penned, good luck in the contest. Sara Kendrick September 13, 2020 at 6:12 AM M.L., Thanks for the well wishes. SK

Harry Horsman August 13, 2020 at 6:26 PM So different for you Sara, THis is powerful poetry at its best. Sara Kendrick September 13, 2020 at 6:08 AM Harry, Ahhh~~Thanks for your kind comment. Sara

Andrea Dietrich August 13, 2020 at 4:39 PM a very creative approach to this challenge, Sara. Your last comment to a poem of mine somehow escaped me. Probably scrolled off comments page before I saw it. Nice seeing you here. Sara Kendrick September 13, 2020 at 6:05 AM Andrea, Thanks for dropping by. Your time spent here is appreciated. I have had carpal tunnel release surgery and it has slowed me down a bit. SK

Jack Horne August 13, 2020 at 12:19 PM this is a really thoughtful write, my friend Sara Kendrick September 13, 2020 at 6:04 AM Jack, Thanks..Your visits are appreciated. Sara

Sigrid Ermine August 9, 2020 at 7:13 PM I think you not only encapsulated the image of incandescence, also represented a harsh interpersonal scenario. Really cool, solid entry. Sigrid Ermine September 27, 2020 at 6:06 PM Oh, I'm incredibly pleased to know there is a happy ending! Sara Kendrick August 10, 2020 at 6:47 AM Sigrid, Your very true interpretation of my work is encouraging. However, they did make it. LOL..Trouble can draw couples together or apart. Thanks for your visit to my page and taking time to read and comment. Sara

Robert L. Hinshaw August 9, 2020 at 3:35 PM Splendid write, Sara! A sure winner - hope all goes well with you and yours - Bob Sara Kendrick August 10, 2020 at 6:42 AM Robert, Thanks for the visit to my page. We are doing okay under the circumstances staying home most of the time. four walls can enclose. LOL..Sara