In Youth I Walked the World So Bold

Frivolous, wanton, devil may care.
pompously, bogus, respectable airs.
an arrogant youth, endowed with beauty.
born of leisure, with no sense of duty.

In youth, I walked the world so bold.
never worried a bit, while growing old.
never noticed my life, wasting away.
only living, and loving, just for today.

As the years began fleeting, I was to blind.
to see sand, in the hourglass, trickling time.
with no purpose, no meaning, without any plan.
I was fooling myself, wasn't really a man.

Now that youth has fled, like the changing seasons.
I'm paying the price for a life without reason.

My first attempt at a Sonnet....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Roberts Avatar
March 30, 2020 at 11:17 PM
Love the title as well
Roberts Avatar
March 30, 2020 at 11:15 PM
I love sonnets This sonnet tells the story
Wolves Avatar
April 2, 2020 at 4:43 PM
You are to kind, thank you
Thompson Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 5:28 PM
Impressed! In very few words you have epitomised the frivolousness of youth. Captivating! Best wishes...Ron :)
Wolves Avatar
February 19, 2020 at 2:11 PM
thank you very much kind Sir.
Bush Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 2:17 PM
You really captured the totality of my own life. Your talent is totally amazing. Keep it up. Always dying for more.
Wolves Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 2:32 PM
thank you, this is about me actually
Dietrich Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 4:54 PM
I really enjoyed your first attempt at sonnet. Keep it up, my friend. (cool to know that you were endowed with beauty!)
Wolves Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 5:36 PM
Thanks, I guess that might not have been the best choice of words lol... But they fit the syllable count whine, whimper, sigh...
Adams Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 6:31 PM
this had great rhythm and flow and a wonderful story within... first attempt=first success... great sonnet Robert... hugs
Wolves Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 6:48 PM
thank you sweet Lady... Hugs
Pandit Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 7:15 AM
You described the BOLD youth many can relate to-- and the ending lines spell fitting conclusion to describe the consequences.
Wolves Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 7:51 AM
Thank you very much
Krutsinger Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 6:10 AM
This is your FIRST attempt at a sonnet? Wow! I am compelled to say BRAVO. You are a natural, Running Wolf. This is a FAVE for me!
Wolves Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 6:31 AM
Thank you so very kindly
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