In Your Smile

How could I paint someone else's smile,
If my eyes can barely see the sky.
How could I start stroke a brush,
Then paint your face in a canvass.

How could I paint a smile today,
If sorrows fade the glow of sun.
The flowers and the butterflies,
What color should I place to hide.

How could I paint a smile in me.
What emotions do I have to try.
Is it a happiness within my soul.
Will it be the same as who I am.

I close my eyes and take a breath.
Now I can see the world beneath.
If someone looks to inner soul.
That's where the perfect smile will show.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Marie Avatar
March 16, 2017 at 8:39 PM
...hauntingly beautiful. the emotions are so tender, there is great strength and love in your gentle words. a joy to read your writing aiyah :-) a fave, 7+ many blessings to you:-) lynnxxx
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 4:38 PM
:) yes!!! That's very true dear sweet Aiyah..:)
Torres Avatar
July 14, 2014 at 3:31 PM
you are sweeter than these words ,my friend Olive!! ^_^ i miss you!! ^_^
Onclaud Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 4:31 PM
how haunting, aiyah.... you got me!.. we can try , "if one looks into my inner soul.." super!... hugs
Torres Avatar
July 14, 2014 at 3:30 PM
oh nette... once again.. you made my hairs all risen up!!! haha.. I MISS YOU SO MUCH!! ^_^ and thank you for keeping on reading my li'l piece.. I miss you all, I miss my world in poetrysoup. :))
Nance Avatar
July 11, 2014 at 6:02 PM
Beautiful ending :) Great to see new poems from your lovely mind. :)
Torres Avatar
July 14, 2014 at 3:33 PM
Thank you Casarah.. :O)) I appreciate your kindess and time.. ^_^
Street Avatar
July 11, 2014 at 4:36 PM
|*:*\(*{{....
Street Avatar
July 11, 2014 at 4:35 PM
I like the ending here, beautiful girl! We find it ofttimes somewhat amazing in some abnormal light ? when another can carry on amid status quo while all about there is so much pain, death and destruction....Seems so surreal to this child and better not to delve into it's waning shades in gray's days ~ But, again we turn unto the Soul and there one can find an escape from this land be their dead ~ Great poe baby girl....KLove *
Torres Avatar
July 14, 2014 at 3:33 PM
Hi Jeremy.. wazzup yo?!>> thanks for this extravagant comment.. you're so sweet! ^_^
Smith Avatar
July 11, 2014 at 4:00 PM
How beautiful... Smiles make the world auch better place....hugs Tim
Torres Avatar
July 14, 2014 at 3:34 PM
Hi Tim!! ..Thanks a lot!! ^_^
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