Franco Gonza Poet Other

In Your Eyes

Cruising softly through virtue of morning
Among primordial wood and fragrant garlands;
New aurora  dazzles inside your lenses ,
Such  afterglow which gently  brings forth 
The rosy  advent of bridal  charm--

And this unfolding of  sun’s first nuptial radiance
Is mirrored within my own ardent eyes,
Hallow as life’s  blessed sacrament.

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Brian Davey October 31, 2017 at 4:49 PM This is simply beautiful writing my friend, congrats on your well deserved first place finish

Nette Onclaud October 31, 2017 at 3:03 PM warm congrats on your first-prize; i was beguiled by the warmth and flow of your awesome piece... thanks for entering, franco!

Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2017 at 2:56 PM - Congratulations on your lovely winning poem, Franco - // S.S.

Gabby Sabre October 26, 2017 at 9:33 AM Wow, man! I read some verses for this competition and this ebullient piece rates very high for me. Like you, I still adore my better-half, Blimp. May your marriage be blessed!