In Your Eyes

When I look in your eyes, I can see a future full of joy,
where though problems will arise, together we will conquer,
them all

In this future I see our strength increasing,
as we help bear each others loads,
when we need it the most

I also see a place, where there are constant surprises ,
around every corner  and,
every day is new and exciting,

Where we find accomplishments, while others find loss,
for we do not know the word quit,
until the victory is found

In the night season we find a song in our hearts,
drawing the beat rhythm, and verse from each other,
as we travel through

When I look in your eyes I see a future filled with life.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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September 14, 2013 at 7:34 PM
Richard, CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem FEATURED on the soups Home Page:-). Good-Night **Linda**
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September 3, 2013 at 3:57 AM
You made a grand entrance here at Poetry Soup Richard. Your debut poem is excellent.
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September 1, 2013 at 1:14 PM
Hi Richard, a lovely write, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat *
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August 31, 2013 at 3:58 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Richard ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
Coleman Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 1:37 AM
Nice why because its out of love so welcome lover poet.
A   Avatar
August 30, 2013 at 9:09 PM
hi Richard, , thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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