Red Fiery Poet Personification

In Your Dreams

The empire  of  my  Love 
stands on the pillar of your strength!
All judgement is yours
power and passion
a beautiful synchronization 
I follow your course
like a slave follows his master
chained with a desire to reach you
like a bird's aspirations for the sky!
every single breath I take 
your lustrous skin
causes reverberations in my heart
my heart melts
             
FOLLOWED BY A PERFECT UNION
  suddenly A TRAIN OF THOUGHTS
TRANSCENDS MY CONSCIENCE 
ONCE AGAIN I DIVE IN YOUR SEA OF DREAMS



copyright 2011 by Smriti Jha

  for a  very special one....

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Anne Rutherford December 4, 2011 at 4:52 AM A very lucky one too . Last stanza is beautiful ,well done!

Wayne Hill October 2, 2011 at 1:19 PM I think a better title would be Diving into Your Sea Of Dreams. i will submit as such if this is O.K.

Anne Rutherford May 30, 2011 at 4:34 PM Smriti I love it , dramatic and full of emotion . Anne

Matthew Anish May 28, 2011 at 9:47 PM Great Mystical Poem! Where are you writing from? Yours Matthew Anish

Diwakar Pokhriyal May 24, 2011 at 11:29 PM LOVELY ONE

Chhutan Dey May 24, 2011 at 4:56 PM I FOUND DEEP LOVE COUPLED WITH A LITTLE CONTRADICTION..MARVELOUS DEAR

Chhutan Dey May 24, 2011 at 4:54 PM I FOUND DEEP COUPLED WITH A LITTLE CONTRADICTION...MARVELOUS DEAR!

Carol Sunshine Brown May 24, 2011 at 6:32 AM Thank you for posting and allowing us to enter into your world of poetry today. The diversity of our poets and their poetry here at PoetrySoup is astounding. It was my pleasure to read your poetry today Smriti. Love, Carol

John Aaron Green May 24, 2011 at 4:19 AM such a wonderful write, you have within you, the power to change lives, and it is a gift from God..

Gwendolen Song May 24, 2011 at 4:05 AM Wonderful simiies throughout...I can just picture the panic as almost fear if a bird weren't allowed to reach the sky... Enjoyed this romantic write. Have a blessed day! Gwendolen

Faizah Spence May 23, 2011 at 7:44 PM Nice, "Chained with a desire to reach you"...loved it... ~Beloved Faizah

Michael Wayne May 23, 2011 at 7:14 PM You have an interesting personality. Rebellious yet submissive in some regards..... I could read a thousand poems written by you and still find you complex and mysterious. You are a step above all poets.