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In your arms I'm so wealthy as we slow dance beneath the moon. I pray for many nights like this. Hold me close and tight, and never let me go, my true. And I promise to hold you in mine, forever. (Yalto) "Yalto" is a form invented by yours truly Line 1-15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3, 2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables Date written: 04/30/2020

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Date: 6/3/2020 1:28:00 PM
The moon casts her enchanting spell on lovers in this lovely form of yours Edward. A great example for the contest my friend. Blessings xxoo
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/3/2020 6:42:00 PM
Thank you very much indeed, Connie:-) Blessings to you, too!

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