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events precipitated creating a ripple causing space to sigh discord replaced harmony a fissure appeared requiring healing specious reasoning presented by eristic ego stifled the throb of love the drama being enacted impacted not the mindful monk who never predicts outcomes who can tell if it is time to gentle the swaying pendulum the hermit has no preference

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Date: 9/25/2023 10:55:00 AM
The hermit has no preference. Yes! What a deep line and such a thought provoking and profound write this is, a mindful monk would not be moved by white noise. So well said and delivered! I love your intriguing and soulful writes always seeker! Sending you light today and always
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Date: 9/25/2023 6:57:00 PM
Thank you dear IE

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