In Winter

Fine white powder dusts the landscape, fluffy
flakes flutter and fall, landing on our skin
now pinked by the freezing air, taking
delight in the beauty of the season.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 7:53 PM
YOu have got that wintery spirit, Carol. I can really picture it. LUv, Andrea
Walsh Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 9:00 AM
Gorgeous description - a watercolour - Liz
Sweetheart Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 8:22 AM
Nice visual imagery Carol along with alliteration too.. very flowing lines of description to old man Winter and what he brings...bbbrrrrhhh.. I am a Summer girl my friend.. but this one is keen.luv..
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