Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

In Waves

Mindless whispers
circling overhead
while waves
of dreariness
wash over me
stirring
haunting 
in the wee hours
of a moonless
sleepless night




Submitted on December 2, 2018 for contest EARLY DECEMBER 2018 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST

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Timothy Mcguire December 4, 2018 at 7:23 PM Great Poem, Great Win! Line Gauthier December 4, 2018 at 8:23 PM Thank you so much, Timothy. Most appreciated.

L. J. Carber December 4, 2018 at 1:56 PM Short but sweet! I like it Line-- congrats on the win. Line Gauthier December 4, 2018 at 2:06 PM Thanks, LJ. I take that as a compliment. Line xx

Eve Roper December 4, 2018 at 10:18 AM I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem, Line , very well written. It stirs a reader's imagination . Congratulations on your win! Line Gauthier December 4, 2018 at 2:06 PM Thanks, eve. Most appreciated.

Gershon Wolf December 2, 2018 at 11:43 AM So personal and so perfect. How did you get inside my head, Line! Eerily telepathic (in my case). Bravo! :) gw Line Gauthier December 2, 2018 at 5:15 PM LOL thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, Gershon.

Funom Makama December 1, 2018 at 12:26 PM Beautiful... So beautiful! Keep it up souper. Line Gauthier December 1, 2018 at 1:53 PM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Funom.

M. L. Kiser November 27, 2018 at 7:10 PM Many of us have spent many a similar night. Well done. Line Gauthier November 27, 2018 at 9:07 PM Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, ML.

Jan Allison November 25, 2018 at 3:57 PM I can relate to these feelings when my hubby had his cancer surgery Line:-( Line Gauthier November 25, 2018 at 4:50 PM Big hug, Jan. Thanks for your visit.

Caren Krutsinger November 25, 2018 at 3:25 PM Naps are allowed, but oh, it is so difficult in the daytime. I am sending healing thoughts to you, my friend. Line Gauthier November 25, 2018 at 4:51 PM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Caren.

Silent One November 25, 2018 at 3:18 PM Oh those sleepless nights... Line Gauthier November 25, 2018 at 4:51 PM Thanks for your visit and for leaving a comment, SO.

Heidi Sands November 25, 2018 at 2:51 PM I know what that is like. Well said :) Line Gauthier November 25, 2018 at 4:51 PM Thanks for your visit and comment, Heidi.